WhatmakesagoodwritingEnjoythefollowingpassages.Hand-writingStructureWhatmakesagoodwriting?OuterbeautyInnerbeautyContentLanguage2.Whatmakesgoodlanguage?(1).Itismyhonortotellyouagoodnews.(2).TheEnglishclubwillholdaEnglishreportmeetingwhatisaboutthestudyingtravelfeel.(3).AreportmeetingwillbeholdbytheEnglishclub.(4).Thereweremanystudentsattendthelearningtrip.(5).What’smore,couldyoupleasegiveusaspeechaboutlearnEnglish?1).Avoidmistakes(6).Notonlywillweshareouropinions,butalsowillappreciatesomebeautifulpictures.

(7).Asweallknow,lastweekwewentonatriptoseveraldifferentplaces.(8).Thelearningtripisbeneficialofourlearning.(9).Lookingforwardtoyourarrive.(10).ProfessorLicomesfromBeijingUniversitywillalsogiveusaspeechnextweek.ProfessorLicomesfromBeijingUniversitywillalsogiveusaspeechnextweek.

ProfessorLiwhocomesfromBeijingUniversitywillalsogiveusaspeechnextweek.

ProfessorLicomingfromBeijingUniversitywillalsogiveusaspeechnextweek.(1).加連詞：(2).使用非謂語：deliver2.Useadvancedvocabulary1）晚詞優先2）短語優先goodimportantvisitvital;essential;significantpayavisittoaccess,available,appealing,charming,challenging,consequently,essentialperfect;excellent;outstandingvital;essential;significantperfect;excellent;outstandingpayavisittovital;essential;significantperfect;excellent;outstandingTip：平時積累吸引某人appealtosb使用，利用makeuseof;takeadvantageof;makethebestof相信，認為keepsth.inmind;bearsth.inmindholdthefirmbeliefthat…;beconvincedthat…記住某事2.UseadvancedvocabularySuddenlyIthoughtthatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.→Anideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.→Itoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.hadanidea3.Usegoodsentencepatterns(1).Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(2).Becausewearedevotedtoourstudyeveryday,wehavenotimetorelaxourselves.(3).Iamwritingyoualetter.Ihopetogetyoursuggestions.What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Devotedtoourstudyeveryday,wehavenotimetorelaxourselves.I’mwritingyoualetter,hopingtogetyoursuggestions.(4).Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinareportmeeting.Itwillbeheldnextweek.(5).Igotthefirstprizebecauseofyourhelp.Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinareportmeeting,whichwillbeheldnextweek.

Icouldn’thavegottenthefirstprize

butforyourhelp.

(6).Wewillholdareportmeetinginthelecturehall.

(7).Wedidnotknowthetruemeaningoftravellinguntilweexperiencedit.

Itwasnotuntilweexperiencedtravellingthatweknewthetruemeaningofit.

Notuntilweexperiencedtravellingdidweknowthetruemeaningofit.

Areportmeeting

willbeheld

inthelecturehall.Summary:（1）非謂語的使用（2）從句的使用（3）特殊句式的使用（4）被動句的使用（5）虛擬語氣的使用4.Usegoodlinkingwords:Brainstormrelevantlinkingwords:1.

表示遞進：2.表示轉折：3.表示因果關系：

4.表示條件關系：5.表示順序關系：6.換一種方法表述：7.進行舉例說明：8.用于陳述事實：9.

對一個話題進行總結：10.其它常用到的副詞：whatismore;besidesonthecontrarysince;as;

therefore;asaresultoncondition(that);aslongasaboveall

inotherwords;thatistosayforinstance;suchastotellyouthetruthallinall;inawordotherwise;personallyAsyouknow,ourmonitorisagoodgirl.Shestudiesveryhardsothatsheisgoodatallthesubjects.What’smore,shelikessports.Shetakesanactivepartintheschoolsportsmeetings.Inaddition,sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Inaword,shehassetusagoodexample.

Ourmonitorisagoodgirl.Shestudiesveryhard.Sheisgoodatallthesubjects.Shelikessports.Shetakesanactivepartintheschoolsportsmeetings.Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Shehassetusagoodexample.（1）使文章連貫，流暢。Ilikesports.Ilikesports,

suchas

swimmingandplayingbasketball.JackisgoodatEnglish.JackisgoodatEnglish.

Forexample,

hecantalkwithforeignersinEnglishfreely.

（2）引出拓展，充實文章內容。UselinkingwordsAvoidmistakesUseadvancedvocabularyUsegoodsentencepatternsSummaryUsethetipstoimproveyourwriting.DearChristina,Howareyourecently?IamLiMing,fromtheEnglishUnion.Iamwritingtoaskyoutoattendareportmeetingonourlatesteducationaltrip.Wearetoholdthisreportmeetingtogivestudentsanopportunitytoshareourdifferentexperienceswithyouandotherstudents.Asyouknow,lastweekwewentonaneducationaltriptoseveraldifferentplacesinourcountry.Weenjoyedourtripalot.Thismeetingwillbeheldfrom4:00p.mto6:00p.monFridayinthelecturehallofourschoolonthesecon