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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Istillrememberthedaywhenwedecoratedthehouse,IwastenanditwastwoweeksbeforeChristmas.Iwaslookingforwardtomypresents.SinceI'mtheyoungestinthefamily,allofthefamilymemberswouldgivemeagiftonewayoranother.Sometimesitwasacookieorahugbutitwasalwaysthere.Iwastheonlycenterofattentionanditwasfeelinggood.MyunclesusuallywouldaskmewhatIwantedbeforeChristmasandthatyearIknewwhatIwanted.ItwasthespaceshipIsawintheads.Iwasdreamingofopeningabiggiftbox,anditwasthere.ButthatyearitcameinawaythatIwasn'texpecting.ItwastwoweeksbeforeChristmas.Justtwoweeks.Shecouldn'twait.Mydearmothertoldmyfatherthatitwastime,andthenwewenttothehospital.Afteranhour,theytoldmethatIhadasisternow.ButIdidn'twantasister.Iwantedaspaceship.Thenextfewdayswentsofast.Noonewascaringaboutme.EveryonewastalkingaboutherandIknewthatmylifeisnevergoingtobethesameeveragain.Iwasn'treadytogrowup,tobeabigbrother.Butitjusthappenedinaninstant.OnthedaybeforeChristmas,everyonewasinourhome,talkingonlyaboutmynewbornsister.Myfamilywasbecominghers.Evenmyunclesdidn'taskmeanythingaboutthegift.ShestoleeverythingI'deverhad,mylifeandmypresents.Thinkingaboutthis,Icriedtosleep.Ihadanightmare(最夢)andwokeupatthemiddleofthenight.Shadowswereallaroundme,andIwasdefenselessandsoweak.Iranintomyparents’bedroombutcouldn'twakeupmypoorparentswhowerejusttoowornout.Iwasstandingneartheirbed,tryingnottocrywhenIsawher.Shewasawakeandlookingatmewithherbigeyesinhersmallbed.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答,Suddenly,shestartedcrying.Afterhavingcomfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.讀后續寫是接受剛出生的小妹妹。我覺得好多學生自己還是孩子,要開始想象有個妹妹什么感受,對于二胎家庭的孩子可能來說好些,第一段的意思很明確:1.
我的反應-哄妹妹(動作+情緒)2,妹妹被哄好(動作+情緒),第二段很簡潔:1.
我的思想轉變
2.
血親的意義
3.妹妹是最好的禮物,呼應原文。1.銜接挺好:Theloudwailspiercedthroughthequietnight,echoingthedeeplongingforattention.(尖銳的哭聲刺破寧靜的夜晚,回蕩著對關注的深切渴望)2.情緒變化:Myinitialannoyanceturnedintoconcern
(我從開始的厭煩變成了擔心)3.安慰動作:Iheldoutmyhand,pattingheronthebackwiththeother,whisperingmyfavoritesongintoherears,justasmymumdidwhenIgotscared.
(我伸出手,用另一只手輕拍她的背,輕聲在她耳邊哼唱我最喜歡的歌曲,就像我害怕時媽媽對我做的那樣。)4.心靈相通:
Inthatmoment,Ifeltastrangeconnectionformingbetweenus.Itwasasifhercrieswereapleaforunderstanding,andI,despitemyinitialresentment,foundmyselfempathizingwithhervulnerability.
(在那一刻,我感到我們之間形成了一種奇妙的聯系。仿佛她的哭聲是一種對理解的乞求,盡管我最初有些憤怒,但我發現自己對她的脆弱感到共鳴。)Theinnocenceandcuriositythatwasintheeyesofeverynewbornlookedtowardsme,grippingmyheartandmellowingmyheart.Somethingcalledabloodbondwakenedinmybody,swearingtoprotectherwithallmystrengthandshareallIhad.(
每一個新生兒眼中特有的天真和好奇看向我,牢牢抓住了我的心,使我變得溫和。一種被稱為血脈相連的東西在我體內蘇醒,發誓要用我所有的力量保護她,分享我所有的東西。5.呼應很好:Eventhoughherarrivalinitiallytookoverthecenterofthewholefamily,shestartedtobecomethecenterofmyattentiontoo.
(盡管她最初成為整個家庭的焦點,但她開始成為我關注的焦點。)6.一個結局:Mysister,withherinnocentlaughterandbrighteyes,becamethegreatestgiftofall,transformingChristmasintoatimeofsharedhappinessandlove.(我的妹妹,帶著她無邪的笑聲和明亮的雙眼,成為了最偉大的禮物,將圣誕節變成了一個共享幸福和愛的時光。)參考范文一,Suddenly,shestartedcrying.
Itwaslikeathunderclapinthedeadsilence.However,soexhaustedweremomanddadthattheysleptsoundly,withoutanysignofwakingup.Thenthecryingturnedbitter,herfistsswingingandherfeetkicking.Herbeddingwaskickedawayandherbodywasexposed.Worriedabouthergettingcold,Iheldherhurriedlyandswungherbackandforth
awkwardly,hummingasongtocomforther.Withmycompanyandsoothingtone,shecalmeddownslowly,staredatmeandthengiggledmerrily..Afterhavingcomfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.
Theinnocenceandcuriositythatwasintheeyesofeverynewbornlookedtowardsme,grippingmyheartandmellowingmyheart.Somethingcalledabloodbondwakenedinmybody,swearingtoprotectherwithallmystrengthandshareallIhad.Then,therewassomestirringbehindmeanditturnedoutthatmomanddadwereawakeaftersomerest.Seeingme,momsaidapologetically,“Thankyou,son.I’msorrythatIhavebeentoobusytoignoreyouandforgottenyourpresent.”
I,nowmatureandhappy,comfortedmymom,“mysisteristhebestChristmasgift
ever.”參考范文二,Suddenly,shestartedcrying.
Panickingatfirst,Ithenrealizeditwasjustapassingcar.However,shefeltuneasy--hermouthwideopen,armswaving,andlegskicking.Thinkingshemightbescaredtoo,Iheldoutmyhand,pattingheronthebackwiththeother.Ievenmovedabitclosertoherlittlebed,whisperingmyfavoritesongintoherears,justasmymumdidwhenIgotscared.Surprisingly,sheseemedtounderstandmeandstoppedcrying.Lookingintoherbigeyes,Ibreathedasighofrelief..Afterhavingcomfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.
Thesenseoflonelinesswasreplacedbytheresponsibilityofbeinganelderbrother.Eventhoughherarrivalinitiallytookoverthecenterofthewholefamily,shestartedtobecomethecenterofmyattentiontoo.Withhercuteroundfaceandsparklingeyes,shealsowonmyloveandcare.Ilookedaroundandfoundmyparentsawake,smilingatme.Withtheshadowofahappyfamilycastonthewindow,IfeltmylittlesisterwasthebestgiftIhadeverreceived.參考范文三,Suddenly,shestartedcrying.
Theloudwailspiercedthroughthequietnight,echoingthedeeplongingforattention.Myinitialannoyanceturnedintoconcern,andIapproachedhercribcautiously.Hertinyfacewasred,andhercriesfilledtheroom.Unsureofwhattodo,Ipickedherup,holdingherclosetocomforther.Inthatmoment,Ifeltastrangeconnectionformingbetweenus.Itwasasifhercrieswereapleaforunderstanding,andI,desp
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