雅思大作文寫作9分范文精講總結Simon來越有名氣。其網(wǎng)站上提供大量關于復習雅思的技巧以及顛覆性的建議，甚至還有不少Simon雅思大作文詳解1：原因分析題型電影話題今天我們來看一篇大作文，題目是：Manypeopleprefertowatchforeignfilmsratherthanlocallyproducedfilms.Whycouldthisbe?Shouldgovernmentsgivemorefinancialsupporttolocalfilmindustries?為什么人們更喜歡外國電影?政府應該支持本土電影嗎?Simon管這種題目叫“Two-PartQuestion”，并且建議大家這種文章要寫成四段，每段具體內容：Introduction:topic+generalanswertobothquestionsAnswerthefirstquestionAnswerthesecondquestionConclusion:paraphrasetheansweryougaveintheintroductionSimonistruethatforeignfilmsmorepopularinmanycountriesthandomesticallyproducedfilms.Therecouldbeseveralreasonswhythisisthecase,andIbelievethatgovernmentsshouldpromotelocalfilm-makingbysubsidizingtheindustry.第二段和第三段為主體段落，Simon建議大家每段各寫五句話，寫之前大家可以發(fā)散一下思維，簡要列出每一句的論據(jù)分別寫什么。下面是Simon給出的每段的大綱：Firstmainparagraph:Whycouldthisbe?sentence-severalreasonsFirstreason-budgetsforaction,specialeffects,spectacularlocationsExample-HollywoodblockbusterslikeorJamesBondfilmsSecondreason-themostfamousactors,actressesanddirectorsFinalreason-poorqualitylocalfilmmakinginmanycountriesSecondmainparagraph:Shouldgovernmentsgivefinancialsupport?sentence-governmentsshouldsupportlocalfilmindustriesExplainwhy-talentedlocalfilm-makersneedopportunitiesExplainmore-theyneedmoneytofilmcrews,actorsetc.Explainconsequences-wouldleadtoemployment,income,tourismExample-inventanexampleaboutyourcountry!SimonThereareseveralreasonswhymanypeoplefindforeignfilmsmoreenjoyablethanthefilmsproducedintheirowncountries.Firstly,theestablishedfilmindustriesincertaincountrieshavehugebudgetsforaction,specialeffectsandtoshootscenesinspectacularlocations.Hollywoodblockbusterslike‘Avatar’ortheJamesBondfilmsareexamplesofsuchproductions,andtheirglobalappealisundeniable.Anotherreasonwhythesebig-budgetfilmsaresosuccessfulisthattheyoftenstarthemostfamousactorsandactresses,andtheyaremadebythemostaccomplishedproducersanddirectors.Thepoorquality,low-budgetfilmmakinginmanycountriessuffersincomparison.結論段Simon是這樣寫的：Inconclusion,Ibelievethatincreasedfinancialsupportcouldhelpraisethequalitylocallymadefilmsandallowthemtocompetewiththeforeignproductionsthatcurrentlydominatethemarket.1Introduction段;2PartFinancialSupport接下來貼出完整版的滿分作文供大家參考背誦：Itistruethatforeignfilmsaremorepopularinmanycountriesthandomesticallyproducedfilms.Therecouldbeseveralreasonswhythisisthecase,andIbelievethatgovernmentsshouldpromotelocalfilm-makingbysubsidizingtheindustry.Therearevariousreasonswhymanypeoplefindforeignfilmsmoreenjoyablethanthefilmsproducedintheirowncountries.theestablishedfilmindustriesincertaincountrieshavehugebudgetsforaction,specialeffectsandtoshootscenesinspectacularlocations.HollywoodblockbustersortheJamesBondfilmsareexamplessuchproductions,andtheirglobalappealisundeniable.Anotherreasonwhythesebig-budgetfilmsaresosuccessfulisthattheyoftenstarthemostfamousactorsandactresses,andtheyaremadebythemostaccomplishedproducersanddirectors.Thepoorlow-budgetfilmmakinginmanycountriessuffersincomparison.InmygovernmentsshouldsupportlocalfilmindustriesIneverycountry,theremaybetalentedamateurfilm-makerswhojustneedbegiventheopportunitytoprovethemselves.competewithbig-budgetproductionsfromoverseas,thesepeopleneedmoneyforfilmcrews,actorsandahostothercostsrelatedtoproducinghigh-qualityfilms.Ifgovernmentsdidhelpwiththesecosts,theywouldseeanincreaseinemploymentinthefilmindustry,incomefromfilmsales,andperhapsevenariseintouristnumbers.NewZealand,forexample,hasseenanincreaseintourismrelatedtothe'LordtheRings'films,whichwerepartlyfundedbygovernmentsubsidies.Inconclusion,Ibelievethatincreasedfinancialsupportcouldhelpraisethequalitylocallymadefilmsandallowthemtocompetewiththeforeignproductionsthatcurrentlydominatethemarket.(294words,band9)Lastbutnottheleast,滿分作文里面的詞匯啦~SubsidizingSubsidyEstablishededAccomplishedadjBlockbuster和ShootScenes這些和電影有關的詞匯大家要記牢，可以用于口語表達中。Financially不僅是對題目表達的替換，而且形容詞變副詞的用法也很靈活。Dominate大家背完這個單詞不知道怎么用的話就背下來這個短語Dominatethemarket，“在市場占據(jù)主導地位”。雅思大作文詳解2：同意與否題型今天我們來分析一篇在觀點上partlyagree的大作文。以一篇大家經(jīng)常會遇到的有關TraditionalViews的作文為例，題目如下：Theoldergenerationstendtohaveverytraditionalideasabouthowpeopleshouldlive,thinkandbehave.somepeoplebelievethattheseideasarenothelpfulinpreparingyoungergenerationsformodernlife.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisview?看到這種問agreedisagreeWhatargumentsandexamplescouldyouusetoagree?Whatargumentsandexamplescouldbeusedtodisagree?Whichanswerwouldyoufindeasier:agree,disagreeorpartlyagree?PlanYourIdea當同意和不同意都有一樣多的論據(jù)可以陳述時，那我們在第一段Introduction段落中，就要表明自己對該問題partlyagree。然后就要進行PlanYourIdea，即把每段要寫的內容SimonplanyourideaSimon是如何planhisidea4-paragraphplan:Introducethetopic'traditionalideasandmodernthenpartlyagree:someideasareoutdated,butothersarestillhelpfulaboutideaswhicharenotsohelpfulnowadays:-havingacareerforlifeisnolongernormalRelationships-'rules'aboutwhoandwhentomarryarechangingGenderroles-traditionalfixedrolesofmenandwomenhavechangedabouttraditionalideaswhichweforget:-workhard,doyourbest,takeprideinyourworkBehavior-politeness,goodmanners,respectforothersCommunity-helpothers,beagoodneighbor,lookafterlocalareaConclusion:repeat/summarizetheanswerStructureSimon給學"HiSimon.Iusedyour4-paragraphstructurewithshortintroductionandconclusion,butIonlygotband6.5.Ineedaband7,soshouldItryadifferentstructure?"Simon：Canyouseewhatiswrongwiththisquestion?Thestudentisassumingthatessaystructureisthesecretahighscore.Butremember:evenagreatessaystructureisnothingwithoutgoodcontent(ideas,vocabulary,andcorrectgrammar).Ifstuckonband6or6.5,youprobablyneedtoimprovethecontent,notthestructure.其實SimonIntroduction然后，我們看一下對于partlyagree的作文Simon是如何寫Introduction段落的：Itistruethatmanyolderpeoplebelieveintraditionalvaluesthatoftenseemincompatiblewiththeneedsofyoungerpeople.WhileIagreethatsometraditionalideasareoutdated,Ibelievethatothersarestillusefulandshouldnotbeforgotten.Simon用了Itistruethat….WhileIagree…,Ibelievethat…句型來分別陳述兩邊觀點，這個句型非常靈活好用，建議大家立刻記在小本本上。主體段落的寫法再來看Simon是如何寫一個主體段落的：Inmyopinion,sometraditionalviewsandvaluesarecertainlyapplicabletothemodernworld.Forexample,oldergenerationsattachedimportanceworkinghard,doingbest,andtakingprideinwork,andthesebehaviorscansurelybenefityoungpeopleastheyentercompetitivejobmarket.Othercharacteristicsthatareperhapsseenastraditionalarepolitenessandgoodmanners.Inourglobalisedworld,youngadultscanexpecttocomeintocontactwithpeoplefromahugevarietyanditisimportantthanevertotreatotherswithrespect.Finally,Ibelievethatyoungpeoplewouldleadhappierlivesiftheyhadamore‘old-fashioned’senseofcommunityandneighborliness.主體段落依然是五句話(topicsentenceand3points),將上面ideas里面的核心詞匯有邏輯地串連起來。接下來幫大家貼出完整的范文：Itistruethatmanyolderpeoplebelieveintraditionalvaluesthatoftenseemincompatiblewiththeneedsyoungerpeople.WhileIagreethatsometraditionalideasareoutdated,Ibelievethatothersarestillusefulandshouldnotbeforgotten.Ontheonehand,manytheideasthatelderlypeoplehaveaboutlifearebecominglessrelevantforyoungerpeople.Inthepast,forexample,peoplewereadvisedtolearnaprofessionandfindajobforlife,butworkersexpectmuchmorevarietyanddiversityfromtheircareers.Atthesametime,the‘rules’aroundrelationshipsarebeingerodedasyoungadultstheirownchoicesaboutwhoandwhentomarry.Butperhapsthegreatestdisparitybetweenthegenerationscanbeseenintheirattitudestowardsgenderroles.Thetraditionalrolesmenandwomen,asbreadwinnersandhousewives,arenolongeracceptedasnecessaryorappropriatebyyoungerpeople.Ontheotherhand,sometraditionalviewsandvaluesarecertainlyapplicabletothemodernworld.Forexample,oldergenerationsattachgreatimportancetoworkinghard,doingbest,andtakingprideinwork,andthesebehaviorscansurelybenefityoungpeopleastheyentercompetitivejobmarket.Othercharacteristicsthatareperhapsseenastraditionalarepolitenessandgoodmanners.Inourglobalisedworld,youngadultscanexpecttocomeintocontactwithpeoplefromahugevarietybackgrounds,anditismoreimportantthanevertotreatotherswithrespect.Ibelievethatyoungpeoplewouldleadhappierlivesiftheyhadamore‘old-fashioned’sensecommunityandneighborliness.Inconclusion,althoughtheviewsolderpeoplemaysometimesseemunhelpfulinworld,shouldnotdismissalltraditionalideasasirrelevant.(299words,band9)Lastbutnottheleastincompatible:twoactions,ideas,etc.thatareincompatiblearenotacceptableorpossibletogetherbecausebasicdifferences,relevant:一對反義詞，即可表示和...緊密相關，也可以表示有重要價值或意義。反義irrelevantprofession:我們背過很多表示專業(yè)的單詞，如major,subject,當表達學習一個專業(yè)本領去找工作時用professiondisparity:差異，不同，比difference高級多了globalisedworld:常用基本表達，需背熟senseof:表達抽象意義的感覺，如senseofdirection方向感，senseofsatisfaction滿足感dismiss:大家最熟悉的意思是“解雇”，記住這個短語dismiss...as,英文釋意todecidethatsb/sthisnotimportantandnotworththinkingortalkingabout雅思大作文詳解3：家庭中男女分工今天我們來講一篇大作文，以一些FamilyTopic的作文為例，重點講一下什么是文章的Skeleton。Simon說，theskeleton(orframeworkorbasicstructure)ofatask2essayis:theintroductiontopicsentencesformainparagraphsandtheconclusionSkeletonSkeletonSimonSkeleton：..........Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhetherparentsorschoolsshouldbeartheresponsibilityforhelpingchildrentobecomegoodcitizens.Inmyview,thisresponsibilityshouldbeshared.Ontheonehand,parentscertainlyhaveavitalroletoplayintheupbringingoftheirchildren.Ontheotherhand,schoolteachersmaycontributealmostasmuchasparentstothedevelopmentofachild.Inconclusion,bothandschoolsshouldworktogethertoensurethatyoungpeoplebecomepoliteandproductivemembers..........SkeletonSimonSkeleton接下來給大家?guī)鞸imon最著名的建議之大作文只要寫13句。分布在各個段落中的名子數(shù)量如下：Introduction:2sentencesFirstmainbodyparagraph:5sentencesSecondmainbodyparagraph:5sentencesConclusion:1sentence有的同學可能會擔心字數(shù)太少，Simon說如果大家看他的作文看多了,you'llseethatIusuallymanagetowrite250orinthisIthinkitseemsalotlessscaryifyouthinkthatyourtaskistowritejust13sentences!Itisnotathatyoumustwrite13sentences.ThisisjustmyapproachormethodSkeletonSimondaysmorefathersstayathomeandtakecaretheirchildrenwhilemothersgooutworkWhatcouldbethereasonsforthis?Doyouthinkitisapositiveoranegativedevelopment?Here'sSimon’ssampleessayskeleton:IntroductionItistruethatmenincreasinglylikelytotakeontherolehousehusband,whilemorewomenthaneverarethebreadwinnersintheirfamilies.Therecouldbeseveralreasonsforthis,andIconsiderittobeaverypositivetrend.Mainbody1,topicsentenceInrecentyears,parentshavehadtoadaptvariouschangesinoursocieties.Mainbody2,topicsentenceInmyview,thechangesdescribedaboveshouldbeseenasprogress.ConclusionInconclusion,thechangingrolesofmenandwomeninthefamilyarearesultofwiderchangesinsociety,andIbelievethatthesedevelopmentsaredesirable.大家的SkeletonnForayftetusI'eaht,aahouhorbgimprovement)camewhentheyfoundtheconfidencewriteina.Simon認為，當你不再糾結文章中是否包含passives,conditionalsor'difficultacademicwords'youarefreefocusonansweringthequestionandexplainingyourideascoherently.你就會將注意力放在如何順暢地表達你的觀點。takesconfidencechangeyourapproachandtobelievethatthewaywillworksimple注意，這里說的Simple，絕對不是Easy!要想寫出高分文章，還是要在Vocabulary、Grammar、Idea三個方面下苦功!這就貼出完整范文：Itistruethatmenareincreasinglylikelytotakeontheroleofhousehusband,whilemorewomenthaneverarethebreadwinnersintheirfamilies.Therecouldbeseveralreasonsforthis,andIconsiderittobeaverypositivetrend.Inrecentyears,parentshavehadtoadaptvariouschangesinoursocieties.Equalrightsmovementshavemadegreatprogress,andithasbecomenormalforwomentogainqualificationsandpursueaIthasalsobecomesociallyacceptableformentostayathomeandlookaftertheirchildren.Atthesametime,therisingcostlivinghasmeantthatbothmarriagepartnersusuallyneedworkandsavemoneybeforestartingaTherefore,whencoupleshavechildren,theydecidewhoworksandwhostaysathomedependingonthepersonalpreferenceeachorbasedonwhichpartnerearnsthemostInmythechangesdescribedaboveshouldbeseenasprogress.shouldbehappytoliveinasocietyinwhichmenandwomenhaveequalopportunities,andinwhichwomenarenotputunderpressuresacrificetheircareers.itseemsonlyfairthatmenshouldbefreeleavetheirjobsinordertoassumechildcareresponsibilitiesifthisiswhattheywishtodo.Couplesshouldbeleftmaketheirowndecisionsaboutwhichparentalroleeachpartnertakes,accordingtotheirparticularcircumstancesandneeds.Inconclusion,thechangingrolesofmenandwomeninthefamilyarearesultofwiderchangesinsociety,andIbelievethatthesedevelopmentsaredesirable.(274words,band9)Lastbutnottheleast,整理一下范文中的重點詞匯~bars:alrtsotftiossarfetherars怎么用asuSimon雅思大作文詳解4：野生動物篇今天我們來看一篇以WildAnimal為Topic的大作文。首先看一下題目：Wildanimalshavenoplaceinthe21stcentury,soprotectingthemisawasteofresources.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?顯然這道題是屬于agreeordisagreeagree,disagree還是partlyagreepartlyagreeSimonCompletelysaa4-paragraphplan.plan，SimonIntroducethetopic(rightsandprotectionwildanimals),thenanswerthequestion(completelydisagree)Firstreasonwhywedisagreee.g.ourdutyprotectanimals,theirrightsandplaceintheworldSecondreasonwhywedisagreee.g.theresourcesweshouldusetoprotectanimals,andwhythisisnotawasteConclusion:repeat/summarizeouranswerIdeasIdeas而對于Introduction和Conclusion段落，大家要記住Simon的話：Theintroductionandconclusionshouldbeshort,quickanddirect.Ifyouwantahighscore,spendyourtimeonthemainbody.我們來看一下Simon是如何寫首尾段落的：Introduction(topic+generalanswer)Somepeoplearguethatitispointlesstospendmoneyontheprotectionwildanimalsbecausewehumanshavenoneedforthem.IcompletelydisagreewiththispointConclusion(paraphrasetheanswer)Inconclusion,wehavenorighttodecidewhetherornotwildanimalsshouldexist,andIbelievethatweshoulddoeverythingwecantoprotectthem.SimonBody現(xiàn)在幫大家貼出完整范文：Somepeoplearguethatitispointlesstospendmoneyontheprotectionwildanimalsbecausewehumanshavenoneedforthem.Icompletelydisagreewiththispointofview.Inmyopinion,itisabsurdtoarguethatwildanimalshavenoplaceinthe21stcentury.IdonotbelievethatplanetEarthexistsonlyforthebenefithumans,andthereisnothingspecialaboutthisparticularcenturythatmeansthatwesuddenlyhavetherighttoalloworencouragetheextinctionanyspecies.Furthermore,thereisnocompellingreasonwhyweshouldletanimalsdieout.Wedonotneedtoexploitordestroyeverylastsquaremetrelandinorderfeedoraccommodatethepopulation.Thereisplentyroomforusexistsidebysidewithwildanimals,andthisshouldbeouraim.Ialsodisagreewiththeideathatprotectinganimalsisawasteresources.Itisusuallytheprotectionnaturalhabitatsthatensuresthesurvivalwildanimals,andmostscientistsagreethatthesehabitatsalsocrucialforhumansurvival.Forexample,rainforestsproduceoxygen,absorbcarbondioxideandstabilizetheEarth’sclimate.Ifwedestroyedtheseareas,thecostsmanagingtheresultingchangestoourplanetwouldfaroutweighthecostsconservation.Byprotectingwildanimalsandtheirhabitats,wemaintainthenaturalbalancealllifeonEarth.Inconclusion,wehavenorightdecidewhetherornotwildanimalsshouldexist,andIbelievethatweshoulddoeverythingwecantoprotectthem.(269words,band9)itispointlesstodo做...無意義itisabsurdtodo做...很荒謬xtitioeoutreasoncompellingconvincingfeedoraccommodatetheworld’spopulation通過這個詞組掌握feed和accommodate的具體用法sabse:sabeoutweighfar雅思大作文詳解5：所謂幸福今天幫大家分析的這篇大作文出自劍橋雅思4，很多同學認為這道題目很難Happinessisconsideredveryimportantinlife.Whyisitdifficulttodefine?Whatfactorsareimportantinachievinghappiness?首先，從題目可以看出，這是一篇非辯論類的關于happiness的作文，大家可能平時練習的比較少，缺乏寫作素材，這里就幫大家?guī)砗芏鄟碜許imon的Ideas：?Happinessmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.?Itcanbedescribedasafeelingofpleasureorenjoyment.?Peopleenjoyspendingtimewithfamilyandfriends.?Hobbies,sportsandgamescanbeasourceoffunandenjoyment.?Somepeopleseemoneyasasourceofhappiness.?Otherpeopledefinehappinessassomethingdeeper.?Theyneedtofeelthattheyaredoingsomethingusefulwiththeirlives.?Somepeoplegetasenseofachievementfromtheirwork.?Othersfindhappinessinbringinguptheirchildren.然后，和以往只有一個題目的大作文相比，這道題包含了兩個問題，這種題型被Simon叫做two-partquestion，同時也給出了這種題型的4段式結構：Usethefollowing4-paragraphessaystructureforthiskindquestion:IntroducethetopicandgiveanoverallanswerbothquestionsAnswerthefirstquestionAnswerthesecondquestionConcludebysummarizingbothanswersDetailsAnswerquestionsIntroductionSimonSimonItisnodoubttruethatthemajoritypeoplewouldtobehappyintheirlives.Whilethepersonalnaturehappinessitdifficulttodescribe,theredoseemtobesomecommonneedsthatweallsharewithregardexperiencingorachievinghappiness.一如既往地用了itis…thatwhileSimonHappinessisdifficulttodefinebecauseitmeanssomethingdifferenttoeachindividualperson.Nobodycanfullyunderstandorexperienceanotherperson’sfeelings,andweallhaveourownparticularpassionsfromwhichwepleasure.Somepeople,forexample,deriveasensesatisfactionfromearningmoneyorachievingsuccess,whereasforothers,healthandfamilyaremuchmoreimportant.Atthesametime,arangeotherfeelings,fromexcitementtopeacefulness,maybeassociatedwiththeideahappiness,andthesamepersonmaythereforefeelhappyinadifferentways.Simon給出的原因非常convincing:由于個體差異，對快樂感知程度不同，定義則不同;快樂可以和多種感覺有關，如興奮或平靜。大家可以看到，Simon在做解釋的時候，時刻不忘舉例子，讓回答變得更加具體，有說服力。所以建議大家多在舉例子方面下功夫。現(xiàn)在貼出完整范文：Itisnodoubttruethatthemajoritypeoplewouldtobehappyintheirlives.Whilethepersonalnaturehappinessitdifficulttodescribe,theredoseemtobesomecommonneedsthatweallsharewithregardexperiencingorachievinghappiness.Happinessisdifficultdefinebecauseitmeanssomethingdifferenttoeachindividualperson.Nobodycanfullyunderstandorexperienceanotherfeelings,andweallhaveourownparticularpassionsfromwhichwepleasure.Somepeople,forexample,deriveasensesatisfactionfromearningmoneyorachievingsuccess,whereasforothers,healthandfamilyaremuchmoreimportant.Atthesametime,arangeotherfeelings,fromexcitementtopeacefulness,maybeassociatedwiththeideahappiness,andthesamepersonmaythereforefeelhappyinavarietyofdifferentways.Althoughitseemsalmostimpossiblegiveaprecisedefinitionhappiness,mostpeoplewouldagreethattheresomebasicpreconditionstoachievingit.Firstly,itishardforapersontobehappyifheorshedoesnothaveasafeplacetoliveandenoughfoodtoeat.Ourbasicsurvivalneedsmustsurelybemetbeforewecanleadapleasantlife.thegreatestjoyinlifeisusuallyfoundinsharedexperienceswithfamilyandfriends,anditisraretofindapersonwhoiscontenttoliveincompleteisolation.Otherfactorscouldbeindividualfreedomandasensepurposeinlife.Inconclusion,happinessisdifficultdefinebecauseitisparticulartoeachindividual,butIbelievethatourbasicneedsforfoodandcompanyneedbefulfilledbeforewecanexperienceit.(292words,band9)最后來做詞匯總結：themajorityof:其反義詞組theminorityof也要記牢regardof:關于individual:個體，個性derive:重點詞匯，在閱讀中也很常見，常和stepfrom/comefrom替換arangeof:重點詞組，在聽力中也極其常見，常和avarietyof/aseriesof替換雅思大作文詳解6：道路安全今天帶來一篇大作文，題目是：Somepeoplethinkthatstrictpunishmentsfordrivingoffencesarethekeytoreducingtrafficaccidents.Others,however,believethatothermeasureswouldbemoreeffectiveinimprovingroadsafety.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.Discussionopinion。SimonHerearethefourtypesofquestion:OpinionDiscussionopinionProblemsolution2-partquestion針對不同類型，大家需要記住的要點是：Anquestionasksforyournottheviewsotherpeople,andyouhavegivebothsidestheargument.Justyouropinionclearintheintroduction,thenexplainitintheresttheOpinion類是詢問你的觀點，而不是其他人的觀點，所以你不必給出雙方論據(jù)。只需在Introduction段落中澄清自己的觀點，然后在后面解釋就可以了。A'discussion'questionrequiresyoutowriteaboutbothsidestheargument,andyoushouldwriteasimilaramountforeachIfthequestionalsoasksforyouropinion,youneedanextraparagraph.Justitclearintheintroductionandconclusionwhichthetwoviewsyouagreewith.Discussion類要求你寫出雙方觀點，雙方字數(shù)相近，不要偏頗。如果問題中有征詢你的意見，你無需另起一段，只需在首尾段中陳述即可。3isSimplywriteaparagraphexplainingtheproblem(s)andaparagraphexplainingthesolution(s).Somequestionsaskabout'causes'or'effects':thesewouldbepartthe'problem'paragraph.ProblemSolutionbFortype4,justanswerthetwoquestions.Writeoneparagraphabouteach.2-partquestion這四種類型都可以用Simon的4段式結構來寫，但是不同類型的文章每個段落內容會有所不同。大家在寫作的時候，首先要先看好題目類型，再選擇合適的段落結構進行寫作。現(xiàn)在貼出滿分范文Peoplehavedifferingviewswithregardtothequestionofhowtomakeourroadssafer.Inmyview,bothpunishmentsandarangeofothermeasurescanbeusedtogethertopromotebetterdrivinghabits.Ontheonehand,strictpunishmentscancertainlyhelptoencouragepeopledrivemorePenaltiesfordangerousdriverscanactasadeterrent,meaningthatpeopleavoidrepeatingthesameoffence.Therevarioustypesdrivingsuchassmallfines,licensesuspension,driverawarenesscourses,andevenprisonsentences.Theaimthesepunishmentsistoshowdangerousdriversthattheiractionshavenegativeconsequences.Asaresult,wewouldhopethatdriversbecomedisciplinedandalert,andthattheyfollowtherulesmoreOntheotherhand,Ibelievethatsafedrivingcanbepromotedinseveraldifferentwaysthatdonotpunishdrivers.Firstly,itisvitallyimportanttoeducatepeopleproperlybeforetheystarttodrive,andthiscouldbedoneinschoolsorevenaspartanextendedormoredifficultdrivingtest.attentioncouldbepaidtosafedesign.Forexample,signscanbeusedtowarnpeople,speedbumpsandbendscanbeaddedtocalmtraffic,andspeedcamerascanhelpdeterpeoplefromdrivingtoogovernmentsorlocalcouncilscouldreduceroadaccidentsbyinvestinginbetterpublictransport,whichwouldmeanthatfewerpeoplewouldneedtravelbyInconclusion,whilepunishmentscanhelptopreventbaddriving,Ibelievethatotherroadsafetymeasuresshouldalsobeintroduced.(269words,band9)詞匯總結：ththtdersr常和spsuspensiondisciplined:名詞discipline變化來的，英文釋意”obeyingtherules”,alert:警覺的，可理解為”watchful”vitally:至關重要的investingin:投資于，注意介詞搭配in雅思大作文詳解7：青少年義務社區(qū)工作今天要分析的是一篇大作文。題目：SomepeoplethinkthatallteenagersshouldberequiredtodounpaidworkintheirfreetimetohelpthelocalTheybelievethiswouldbenefitboththeindividualteenagerandsocietyasawhole.Doyouagreeordisagree?SimonSimon這樣一IsthereanyspecificstudyorderthatyourecommendSimonstudyorder：EssaystructureandparagraphsThefirstthingtodoisfindanessaystructurethatworksforyou.probablyknowthatIpreferwrite4paragraphs,andmaybeseenhowIwrite2-sentenceintroductions,5-sentencemainparagraphsand1-sentenceconclusions.this:takesomeessaysthatyouhavealreadywritten,andrewritethemsothattheyallhavethesamenumberparagraphsandsentences.首先要想好文章的Structure。Simon喜歡寫4段式——開頭兩句，主體段落各五句，結尾一句。大家可以嘗試將之前寫好的作文都重新寫成這種結構。Questiontypesneedtoseeexamplesthefourquestiontypes,andsureyouknowhowtoanswereachtypeusingyourpreferredessaystructure.平時多看大作文四種類型的范文，針對題目類型，選用合適的Structure。Planning,andisolatedparagraphpracticeTakeseveraldifferentquestions,andpracticeplanningideas.Thenspendsometimefocusingonlyonintroductionse.g.writeanintroductionforfivedifferentquestions.Thendothesamewithconclusions.Thentrywritingdifferenttypesmainparagraphe.g.an'advantages'paragraph,anparagraph,a'problem'paragraphetc.選一些題目，練習planningideas.比如可以寫五篇不同題目的introduction，或者寫不同類型題目的主體段落。ideasWhenyouareconfidentthatyouknowhowtowriteanessay,it'stimetostartworkingthroughasmanycommonIELTSwritingtopicsaspossible.Evenifyoudon'twriteafullessayforeachtopic,youshouldatleastplansomeideasandopinions.Mistakes,correctionsandimprovementsTrytofindsomeonewhocancheckyourwriting,highlightandexplainyourmistakes,andshowyouhowtoimproveyouressays.找個能幫你檢查作文的小伙伴，能指出錯誤并告訴你如何改善。以上就是Simon對于studyorder的建議，接下大家按照Simon的指示，寫一下今天的作文，寫好之后可對照范文。滿分范文：Manyyoungpeopleworkonavolunteerbasis,andthiscanonlybebeneficialforboththeindividualandsocietyasawhole.However,Idonotagreethatweshouldthereforeforceallteenagerstodounpaidwork.Mostyoungpeoplearealreadyunderenoughpressurewiththeirstudies,withoutbeinggiventheaddedresponsibilityworkingintheirsparetime.Schoolisjustasdemandingasafull-timejob,andteachersexpecttheirstudentsdohomeworkandexamrevisionontopattendinglessonseveryWhenyoungpeopledohavesomefreetime,weshouldencouragethemtoenjoyitwiththeirfriendsorspenditdoingsportsandotherleisureactivities.Theyhavemanyyearsworkaheadthemwhentheyfinishtheirstudies.Atthesametime,Idonotbelievethatsocietyhasanythingtogainfromobligingyoungpeopletodounpaidwork.Infact,Iwouldarguethatitgoesagainstthevaluesafreeandfairsocietyforceagrouppeopledosomethingagainsttheirwill.Doingthiscanonlyleadtoresentmentamongstyoungpeople,whowouldfeelthattheybeingused,andparents,whowouldnotwanttobetoldhowtoraisetheirchildren.nobodyisforcedtoandthisissurelythebestsystem.Inconclusion,teenagersmaychoosetoworkforfreeandhelpothers,butinmyopinionweshouldnotmakethiscompulsory.(250words,band9)onaorsis:na…asionanannualbasistakeyourskinonaregularbasisrevision:動詞是revise,也常見于閱讀，修改，修定obliging:形容詞，樂于助人的;其動詞是oblige，意為強迫resentment:怨恨，可替換hatecompulsory:強制的，Compulsoryeducation義務教育雅思小作文詳解8：傳統(tǒng)音樂與國際音樂今天要分析一篇大作文，題目：TherearemanydifferenttypesmusicintheworldWhydoweneedmusic?Isthetraditionalmusicacountrymoreimportantthantheinternationalmusicthatisheardeverywherenowadays?SimonListAdvertisingAnimalRights:testingonanimals,vegetarianism,zoosCities:urbanization