PARTTHREE第三篇寫作妙解篇話題(二)

觀點建議典例分析自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺,生活越來越精彩。假如你是李華,請你為校刊《英語園地》“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文,談談自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的經歷,并說說我們如何才能更加自信。[提示詞語]powerful,happy,believein,keepdoing[提示問題]·Whyisitimportanttobeconfident?·Whatexperiencemadeyoumoreconfident?·Howcanwebecomemoreconfident?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作架構】【思路點撥】1.要點提煉:本文是一篇記敘文,主題是觀點建議。根據題目要求,可以提煉出3個要點:(1)說明自信的重要性(2)介紹一次讓你更自信的經歷(3)說明如何變得更自信2.時態:一般過去時和一般現在時3.人稱:第一人稱【基礎寫作】Ⅰ.根據所給提示詞補全下列各句1.對每一個人來說擁有自信很重要。(It'simportantfor…to…)__________________________________________________________________________________________________2.自信可以給我們勇氣去堅持自己想要做的事情。(stickto)Confidencecan

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whatwewanttodo.

3.盡管我在家里練習了很多次,但是依然感到緊張。(although)

formanytimesathome,

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It'simportantforeveryonetobeconfident.bringuscourage

sticktoAlthoughIhadpracticedit

Istillfeltnervous4.我深呼吸并讓自己放松。(takeadeepbreath)I

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5.我的老師高度評價了我的表演并且我從同學那里獲得了很大的鼓勵。(thinkhighlyof)Myteacher

andI

frommyclassmates.

tookadeepbreath

relaxedmyselfthoughthighlyofmyperformance

gotmuchencouragementⅡ.句子升格按括號中的要求改寫句子。6.IwasinGrade7.Myteacheraskedmetogiveaspeechinclass.(用as連接兩個句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________________7.Confidenceisimportant.Confidenceisvaluable,too.(用aswell連接兩個句子)___________________________________________________________________________________________________8.Beingconfidentisimportant.Confidencecanbringuscouragetosticktowhatwewanttodo.(用for連接兩個句子)___________________________________________________________________________________________________AsIwasinGrade7,myteacheraskedmetogiveaspeechinclass.Confidenceisimportantandvaluableaswell.Beingconfidentisimportantforitcanbringuscouragetosticktowhatwewanttodo.9.Weneedtoknowourownadvantages.Wecanbuildconfidence.(用inorderthat連接兩個句子)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________10.Putinenoughefforttowhatwedo.(用It'snecessaryto…改寫句子)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________Weneedtoknowourownadvantagesinorderthatwecanbuildconfidence.It'snecessarytoputinenoughefforttowhatwedo.【連句成文】It'sveryimportanttobeconfident.Self-confidencecanbringuscouragetosticktowhatwedo.Soit'svaluabletous.WhenIwasinGrade7,oncemyteacheraskedmetomakeaspeechinclass.AlthoughIhadpracticeditformanytimesathome,Istillfeltnervousandforgotthethebeginningofit.Then,Ibreatheddeeplyandrelaxedmyself.Youcan'tbelievehowhappyIwaswhenIrecalledthespeechandfinisheditsuccessfully.MyteacherthoughthighlyofmyperformanceandIgotmuchencouragementfrommyclassmates.Fromthenon,Ihavebecomemoreandmoreconfident.Tobuildconfidence,firstly,weneedtoclearlyknowaboutourownadvantagesandtrytodevelopthem.Themostimportantisthatweshouldputinenoughefforttowhatwedo.Thenwecanfinallymakeitandgainmoreconfidence.拓展積累【導入主題】1.Beingconfidentissoimportantthatitcanbringuscouragetosticktothingsthatwewanttodo.2.Self-confidencecanhelpusovercomefearandfaceanychallengebravely.3.Confidenceissovaluabletousbecauseitcanhelpusfaceanydifficultybravely.【描寫經歷】1.AlthoughIhadpracticeditmanytimesathome,Istillfeltnervousandforgotthebeginningofit.2.Myclassmatesclappedformeandsmiledatme,whichgavememuchencouragement.【總結感受】1.Inordertobuildconfidence,weneedtoclearlyknowwhatourstrongpointsareandtrytodevelopthem.2.Ontheonehand,it'snecessaryforustoknowouradvantages.Ontheotherhand,weshouldputinenoughefforttowhatwedo.實戰演練“百善孝為先”,孝敬父母是中華民族的傳統美德。某英語報社正在舉辦以“弘揚中華傳統文化”為主題的征文活動,請你以“Weshouldhonorourparents”為題,寫一篇短文參加征文活動。內容包括:你平時為父母做些什么,你對孝敬父母的看法,以及作為中學生應該怎樣孝敬父母。[提示詞語]honorourparents(孝敬父母),duty,important,raise,housework,communicate[提示問題]·Whatdoyouoftendoforyourparents?·Whyshouldwehonorourparents?·Howshouldwehonorourparents?WeshouldhonorourparentsAsweknow,honoringourparentsisanexcellenttraditionofChina.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One

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