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Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(軟木塞）forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I'mgoingtosetitdown,now,"Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican'tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.1.所續寫的短文詞數應為150左右;2.應使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語3.續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;4.續寫完成后,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.

Paragraph2:ThevideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween

Writingstyle:narrationWritingorder:timeWhen:beforeHalloweenWhere:kitchenWho:dad,mom,I,Jason一家人伏筆：下文母親把拍攝的視頻上傳到了網上提供信息：我的頭之后拔不出來了起因：為證明自己的南瓜最大

把頭塞進南瓜Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(軟木塞）forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.

Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I'mgoingtosetitdown,now,"Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.高潮-問題出現

頭出不來了WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican'tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.

嘗試各種辦法Para1Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Para2ThevideowaspostedonlinethedaybeforeHalloween.1.Whatwasmyfeelingatthattime?2.Whatwasthereactionofmyfamily?3.HowdidIfinallygetmyheadoutofthepumpkin?*Momwasfilmingthewholetime1.Wasthevideopopularandwhat'sthereactionofthepublic?2.HowdidmyfamilyandItakethematter?3.ENDINGWriting情節走向

通過第一段首句“Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.”可預測，續寫思路為：我被困住--家人幫助--成功獲救--被拍攝記錄下來通過第二段首句“ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.”可預測，續寫思路為：視頻走紅--我和家人的反應-我的感悟Paragraph1：

Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Feelings：I

cannotbreath. scaredSomeonecametohelpme.EventuallyIwasrescued.（solutions/actions）SomeonewasfilmingthewholeprocessParagraph2：

ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.Thepostgaintoomuchsharesandlikes.Iwasembarrassed/excited？Ilearnalesson/summarizetheexperienceThehappyending續寫賞析Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.IstillrememberedhowIgotrescued.Theairinsidethehollowvegetablewasfullofmyanxiousbreath.Uponseeingwhathadhappened,overwhelmedwithanxietyandfear,momlaiddownherphoneandapproachedtowardsmeinaflash.續寫賞析“Don’tuseupallyouroxygen!”shecried,pushingmyheadfartherintothepumpkinsothatshecouldreachinandundomyrubberband.OnlywhenmomsparedenoughspaceformedidImanagetogetoutofitsuccessfully,thoughmychinandnosewerefullofpain.“Imadeit!”Iletoutacryofrelief.My14-year-oldbrother,Jason,standinginfrontofme,itwasonlythenthatIrealizedhe’dbeenfilmingthewholetime.續寫賞析ThevideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.Surprisingly,itbecameahitthatthevideostartedrackinguphundredsofthousandsofviews.Attheverybeginning,hardlycouldIcontainmyembarrassmentwhenIwasrecognizedastheoneinthevideo.However,withtimetricklingby,mylifewasbackontrack.AfamilytraditionaspumpkincarvingatHalloweenwas,thefollowingyearwasamoresedateaffair.WheneverIthoughtaboutthedayonwhichIgotmyheadstuckinapumpkin,Icouldn’thelpbutlaughoutloud.IwouldsayIlearnedmylesson—lookbeforeyouleap!2021年1月浙江卷讀后續寫

生動的語言非謂語動詞作狀語結果狀語從句with結構強調句2021年1月浙江卷讀后續寫

ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.

Bytheendofthatdayithadhadover1,000views,andbyHalloweenmorningwehadgotphonecallsfromTVshows—thevideostartedgettinghundredsofthousandsofsupporters.WhenIwalkedinthestreet,IwasrecognisedbypeopleI’dnevermet.Thepumpkinalsobecameaminorcelebrity.Passersbyandtrick-or-treaterswouldknockandasktotakeselfieswithit.Thoughembarrassed,IwassatisfiedwiththehappinessandfunthatIhadbroughttoothers.固定搭配時間狀語從句定語從句非謂語動詞短語固定表達定語從句

(2021年1月浙江卷范文首段)Iwasstuckforabout5-6minthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Thepassing-awayminuteswitnessedmyembarrassment.IfonlyIhadneverforcedmyheadinoutofcuriosity.Jason,awareofsomethingwronghappening,rushedtodadforhelp.Meanwhile,Iwassparingeveryefforttomakemyheadout.Dadcametothespot,paralyzedbutthenburstintolaughter.Heattemptedtopullmeoutbutinvain.Afterwhatseemedacentury,hebrokethepumpkinwithasharpknifecarefully.Tomygreatrelief,IcouldbreathethefreshHalloweenair.However,whatsurprisedmemostwasthatmybelovedmomshouldfilmallthethings!

動作描寫1.(mom)laid(lay)down---approachedtome---”.....”shecried.2.(dad)pushmyheadfartherin---(Jason)undotherubberband---spareenoughspace---(I)managetogetout3.(Jason)awareof.../seeingmyrepeatedbutfruitlessefforts---rushedtodadforhelp4.(dad)cametothespot---burstintolaughter---attempttopullmeout(butinvain)---breakthepumpkinwithasharpknife5.”.....”(Jason)yelled----calleddadforheip6.(dad)uponhearing..---rushedoutandsnatchedaknife---tearitopen結尾句1.Every

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2.ThoughIwasdissatisfiedwithmyuglygestureandstupidimage,(Thoughembarrassed,)IwassatisfiedwiththehappinessandfunthatIbroughttoothers.(當時的積極感受)3.Undoubtedly,itwasthemostunforgettableHalloweenthoughIstillhavenoideawhosepumpkinwasbiggeryet.

（首尾呼應）4.WheneverIthoughtaboutthedayonwhichIgotmyheadstuckinapumpkin,Icouldn’thelpbutlaughoutloud.IwouldsayIlearnedmylesso