2013年8月25日托福寫作真題剖析綜合寫作：文章表達關于dogdomestication的事情readingpassage里講了三點：說domesticeteddog的ancestor是狼,因為相似的基因；說是人類的活動帶動了dogdomestication，即馴化過程是人工選擇的結果；3,講dogdomestication的大概時期，大概是14000年以前，因為發現葬在一起。lecture里教授逐一反駁：說祖先根本不是狼，有一種野狗基因更相似；還說dog的馴化是自然選擇的結果，和人類活動沒關，因為友善的狗能吃人扔掉的東西，更可能存活下去；3最后說文章里說的時間也不對，絕比較14000年早，在人類settledown以前還打獵為生的時候狗就已經馴化了。因為從先人們主要游牧捕獵，即使有也不會葬在一起，直到14000年先人們才開始下葬類活動。獨立寫作：第一套：綜合寫作：閱讀：一個叫L的statue，以前說是遠古的，今后說是一個叫M的人做的。原因：1.他剛出道時為了讓自己有名，模擬了一個古代的東西C,所以此次可能也是他模擬的。2.他畫過一個畫里面的人，和這個statue動作相同。3.貌似是賣個好價錢什么的。聽力：1.模擬一個不代表今后每個都模擬啊。2.動作不相似，一個舉左手一個舉右手，而且背部姿勢什么的不相同...沒聽清。所以不切合。3.主要的花銷者是皇上公主之類的人，他不敢cheatingtheprice.獨立寫作：Itislessimportanttoeatwithfamiliesregularlynowadays.Sampleresponse:Inthe21stcentury,therehasbeendramaticimprovementindiverseaspectsofpeople’slives.However,peoplearebecomingincreasinglybusyandsometimesareoverwhelmedbyendlessworkorstudy.Asaresult,lesstimeisdevotedintofamiliesandpeoplenolongerhavemealsregularlywithfamilymembers.Inmyopinion,thisistotallymistakenanditissignificantforpeopletoeatwithfamilymembersregularlydespiteofthechangeoftime.Myreasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,forparents,havingregularmealswithchildrencanpromoteparentalrelationship.Duetopeople’sbusydailyschedules,parentsandchildrentendtohavelessconversationnowadays.Childrenspendmostoftheirtimelearninginschoolandplayingwithpeers;adultsareoccupiedwiththeirworkandsocializingwithcolleagues.Theimportanceofhavingfamilymealsisignored.Peopleforgetthattimespendatthetablecanbemeaningful.Forexample,parentscandiscovertheproblemsthattheirchildrenstrugglewith.Theycanprovideguidanceorinspirechildrentofindoutsolutionbygivingthemsomenicetips.Inthisway,childrencanfeelthecareandlovefromparentsandparentscanknowaboutchildren’sthoughts.Itbringsmutualbenefits.Inaddition,forcouples,havingregularmealscanstrengthenpartners’relationship.Commonsensetellsusthatastimegoesby,passionbetweenloversdecreases.Thelackofcommunicationcanalsoresultinmarriageproblemsorevenseriouscrises.Byspendingsomequalitytimewithourbelovedcompanionatmealtablewecanlistenandunderstandeachotherbetter.Ensuringatleastonemealwithourpartnersadayshowsone’scareandhowmuchwevaluetheotherpersoninspiteofthebusyschedule.Willingtomaketimeforsomeoneisagreatwaytodemonstratelove.Lastly,forchildren,itisofgreatsignificancetohaveregularmealswithouragingparents.Youngpeopletodayarebusywiththeirownworkandpersonallifeandtheyoftenneglectthefeelingsoftheelders.Somemaygivemoneyregularlytotheelderinsteadofgoinghometoaccompanythembecausetheythinkfinancialmeansisagoodwaytoshowtheirloveandcare.However,accordingtoasurveyconductedbyBeijingNormalUniversity,afterpollingtensofthousandsofoldpeople,thetoppriorityoftheirwishesisexpectingtheirsonsanddaughterstogohomeregularlyandhaveregularmealswiththem.Thesurveyalsoindicatesthattheelderswhoareregularlyaccompaniedbytheirfamilymemberstendtolivelongerandhappier.Allinall,consideringtheessentialrolethatregulareatingwithfamiliesplaysonchildren,companionandtheelder,Iinsistthatitisstillofgreatimportanceforpeopletoeatwithfamiliesregularlynowadays.(464words)第二套：綜合寫作：Argentavis，一種滅絕的鳥閱讀說這個鳥不能夠飛翅膀太長，撲騰時會撞擊地面；太重，68KG，肌肉不足以支持她遨游；不需要遨游。聽力：教授反駁，說他會飛：鳥能夠起跑在騰躍，比方從山上向下跑；它只需要張開翅膀在空中滑行3.遨游有利于scavenge就是說工作的地方也許學校訂工人也許學生的著裝進行要求,你贊成還是不相同獨立寫作：Doyouagreeordisagree:SomescientistsareresponsibleforthenegativeimpactsthataremadebytheirdiscoveriesSampleResponse:Numerousincidentshaveprovedthatscienceandtechnologydouble-edgedsword.Consequently,itisarguedthatsome

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asaareresponsibleforthenegativeimpactsmadebytheirdiscoveries.Frommypointofview,Idisagreewiththestatementforthefollowingreasons.Firstandforemost,theoriginalintentionorpurposeofsomescientistsispositive.Thiscanbeconfirmedfrommultipleexamples.Thediscoveryofnuclearpowerwasintendedtobenefithumankindandfosterscientificresearchonphysics.Thepurposeofbiologicalresearchmeanttohelppeopletounderstandbiologicalcharacteristicsandlawsmoreclearlyandprecisely.Pharmaceuticalresearchitselfwasjusttodevelopnewmedicinestotreatdiseaseeffectivelyandpertinentlyatthebeginning.Therefore,itisjusttosaythatsomescientistsshoulderlittleresponsibilityonthenegativeconsequencesbroughtoutbytheirdiscoveries.Inaddition,noscientistscanaccuratelyanticipatethefutureimpactsoftheirdiscoveries.Firstly,ashumans,weallhaveourlimitations.Scientistsareoftenexpertsinoneparticularfieldandcannotseethebigpictureineverysmalldetails,whichmeansmanyadverseeffectsthattakeplacelatercannotbepredictedearlyintime.Secondly,thesocietyisdevelopingatanamazingspeedthattheseeminglygooddiscoveriesnowadaysmightturntoabadoneinashortperiod.Takegeneticmodificationasaninstance,atitsbirth,itwasreallyafabulousfindingforacceleratingnewplantvarietiesresearch.However,laterscientistsfoundoutthathavinggeneticmodifiedfoodmayleadtogenemutationinhumanbody,whichmaycausefataldamagestopeopleanditspotentialrisksarealsobeyondmeasure.Lastly,itisoftenthelattergenerationthatareresponsibleforthedetrimentaleffectsofthosediscoveries.Scientificdiscoveryitselfdoesnotnecessarilyresultinnegativeimpacts.Itispeoplewhousethemwithulteriormotivesthatcauseharmtothesociety.Atomicbombisagoodcaseinpoint.DuringtheSecondWorldWar,inordertoexpeditetheJapanesesurrenderandendthewarassoonaspossible,nuclearweaponsweredesignedandmanufactured.TheywereputintooperationinHiroshimaandNagasakiofJapan,causingtremendousdamagesandcountlessinjuriesanddeaths.However,thishasnothingtodowithEinsteinwhohasmadesignificantscientificbreakthroughsforpeopletounderstandthemechanismofnuclearpower.Actually,Einsteinhimselfwasastronganti-waractivistandheonceregrettedtohavetoldFranklinRoosevelttheenormouspowerofatomicbombs.Tosumup,basedontheaboveana