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大學生英語作文賞析關于如何看待大學生上網的英語作文InternetSurfing-因特網沖浪Nowadays,thereisagrowingpopularityofInternetsurfingoncollegecampus.Anincreasingnumberofstudents,majoringeitherinscienceorengineeringorin1iberalarts,spendmanyhourssurfingtheInternetwithkeeninteresteveryday.Internetsurfinghasattractedcollegestudents1ikemagnetsbecauseitistheworldofInternetandtheworldofgloba1ization.First,withthegloba1coverageofInternet,wecanreachoutandtouchanyoneatanyplaceoftheworld.ViaInternet,wecansendandreceiveE-mai1satanytimemuchfaster,cheaperandmoreeffectivethanconventiona1meanssuchastelephone,telexandfax.Next,viaaccesstothehomepagesof1ibraries,universities,journalsandnewsagencies,andresearchorganizations,wecaneasilyacquirea11kindsofinformation,toknowwhatisgoingonal1overtheworld.Fina1ly,byclickingthemouse,wearecapableofdoingsuchimportantthingsasshopping,findingjobs,makingfriends,down-loadingfilesandprograms,doingbusiness,publishingpapersandfreelyairingouropinionsonal1sortsofinterestingissues.Whatismore,Internetoffhrsmanyopportunities.Forexample,wecanwork,educateourselvesandcommunicatewithothersathomeviaInternet.IntheInformationAge,itisdifficuhtoimaginemodernlifewithoutInternet.WiththerapiddevelopmentofInformationTechnologyindustry,successfuldot-comcompaniesmushroomedeverywhere.Internetisrevolutionizingoureconomy,oursocietyandourlife.關于大學生壓力的英語作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowShouldCollegeStudentsReiievePressure?Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheout1ine(giveninChinese)below:1)當今的大學生要面臨很多來自不同方面的壓力2)大學生緩解壓力的方式有…3)你一般都是如何排解壓力的?HowShouldCollegeStudentsReiievePressure?關于大學生壓力的英語作文-行文思路本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一個問題,提綱第2點要求說明如何解決該問題,提綱第3點要求闡述“我”的做法,由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。根據所給提綱,本文應包含如下內容:指出當今的大學生主要面臨哪些壓力;列舉大學生緩解壓力的方式;談談“我”是采取哪種方式排解壓力的。關于大學生壓力的英語作文-高分范文HowShouldCollegeStudentsReiievePressure?Today'scollegestudentsfacemanypressures,mainlyfromparents,expectation,study,economy,employmentandallkindsofcompetition.[1]Althoughpressuretosomeextentcanprovidemotivation,overduepressurehasaseriousnegativeeffect.Pressurecandestroyastudent5sconfidence.[2]Moreseriously,itmightmakesomestudentslosecontroloftheiremotionsandbehaviors.[3]Consideringthegreatdamageofoverduepressure,collegestudentsshouldlearntohowtorelievepressure.[2]First,weshouldhavearightevaluationofourselves[4]soasto[5]makeuseofadvantagesandavoiddisadvantages.[2]Second,weshould[6]setaclearaimofastruggle.Theaimcangiveusmotivation,andmakeusbecomeactive.[2]Third,[7]attendingcollectiveactivitiesisaneffectivewaytorelievepressure.[2]Fina1ly,ifyoufindpressureisnearly[8]beyondyourcontrol,you'dbetterturntoprofessionalpsychologica1guidance.[2]Astome,mypressureismainlyfromfutureemployment.[4]Inordertoreduceit,Iaskedmyparentshelpmeanalysemyadvantagesanddisadvantages,andproduceamorepracticaljobobjection.[2]Somyemploymentpressurewasrelievedgreatly.NowIbecomeconfidentinmyfuture,andI[9]dobelieveIcangetanidealjobaftermygraduation.【亮點點評】[1]although引導讓步狀語從句。[2]過渡銜接詞語,使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。⑶“考慮到,鑒于”,介詞.[4]表示目的。“揚長避短”。“設立一個明確的奮斗目標”。[7]動名詞短語作主語,用不同于前兩點的句式提出緩解壓力的第三種方式。[8]“超出…范圍或能力”。[9]強調動詞believeo佳句臨摹.佳句:Althoughpressuretosomeextentcanprovidemotivation,overduepressurehasaseriousnegativeeffect.臨摹:盡管兼職工作能夠帶來很多好處,但我們不應該在它上面花費太多的時間。.佳句:Attendingcollectiveactivitiesisaneffectivewaytorelieve臨摹:學會如何與人溝通是步入社會的第一步也是最重要的一步。.佳句:Inordertoreduceit,Iaskedmyparentshelpmeanalysemyadvantagesanddisadvantages臨摹:為了在激烈的競爭中獲得優勢,大學生們必須全面發展自己的能力。[KEY]Althoughapart-timejobdoesmuchgoodtous,weshouldnotspendtoomuchtimeonit.Learninghowtodealwithpeopleisthefirstandthemostimportantsteptoenterintothesociety.Inordertogettheirpriorityinthefiercecompetition,collegestudentshavetodeveloptheirabi1ities關于大學生使用信用卡的英語作文Directions:Forthispart,youarea1lowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCreditCardsonCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheout1ine(giveninChinese)below:1)近年來越來越多的大學生開始使用信用卡2)分析產生該現象的原因3)針對大學生使用信用卡提出你的建議CreditCardsonCampus關于大學生使用信用卡的英語作文-行文思路本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象,提綱第2點要求分析產生該現象的原因,提綱第3點要求針對該現象給出“我”的建議,由此可判斷本文應為現象解釋型作文。根據所給提綱,本文應包含如下內容:描述大學生使用信用卡的現狀;分析大學生信用卡用戶增加的原因;針對大學生使用信用卡提出“我”的建議。關于大學生使用信用卡的英語作文-高分范文CreditCardsonCampusInrecentyears,creditcardshave[1]gainedmorepopularityamongcollegestudents.[2]Withbanks5morefocusoncollegemarket,[3]anincreasingnumberofcollegestudentshaveappliedforacreditcardandbeguntoconsumebyit.[4]Thefollowingthreefactorscanaccountforthepopularityofcreditcardsincollege.[5]Firstly,acreditcardprovidesoverdrawingservice,[6]whichis[7]abigattractionforthosestudentswhohavenomuchmoneyfortheirdomination.[5]Secondly,acreditcardcanhelpreleasefinancialburdensonthosepoorstudents,and[8]hencereducetheriskoftheirdroppingschoolforlackingmoney.[5]Besides,manybanksmakesomepreferentia1policiesoncreditcards,likesendingagift,loweringyearcost.[7]Drawnbythesepolicies,manycollegestudentsapplyforcreditcards.[5]AsfarasIamconcerned,itisnotabadthingforcollegestudentstoowncreditcards.[5]However,thereismisuseofcreditcardsamongcollegestudents.Manystudentsusecreditcardstobuyluxuriousthingstheydon,tneedrea1ly,andevensomeofthemoweabigcreditcardsdebt.[5]Therefore,schoolsandbankshaveresponsibi1itytoletcollegestudentslearnhowtousecreditcardsproperly.[9]Onlyinthiswaycancollegestudentsenjoyrea1lytheadvantagesofcreditcards.關于大學生使用信用卡的英語作文【亮點點評】[1]“越來越流行”。⑵“隨著”,介詞。⑶“越來越多的,,[4]用于引出原因。[5]過渡銜接詞語,使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。[6]which引導非限制性定語從句。[7]表示“吸引”的兩種不同的方式,用詞富于變化。[8]“由此,因此”。“only+狀語”位于句首,引起句子部分倒裝。關于大學生使用信用卡的英語作文-佳句臨摹.佳句:Withbanks'morefocusoncollegemarket,anincreasingnumberofcollegestudentshaveappliedforacreditcard.臨摹:隨著市場經濟的快速發展,金錢在社會中扮演著越來越重要的角色。.佳句:Acreditcardcanhelpthosepoorstudentspaytheirtuitionandfees,andhencereducetheriskoftheirdroppingschool.臨摹:一些同學希望通過社會實踐提高自己的能力,并由此來增加就業機會。.佳句:Drawedbythesepolicies,manycollegestudentsapplyforcreditcards.臨摹:在就業壓力的迫使下,一些大學生開始自主創業。[KEY]Withtherapiddevelopmentofmarketeconomy,moneyplaysamoreandmoreimportantroleinthesociety.Somestudentshopetoenhancetheirpracticalabi1itiesbyattendingsocialpractice,andhenceincreasetheirchancesofemployment.Forcedbyemploymentpressure,somecollegegraduatesbegintosetuptheirownbusinesses.(關于勤儉節約的英語作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicIsThriftStillaGoodVirtue?Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheout1ine(giveninChinese)be1ow:1)隨著人們生活水平的提高,一些人認為勤儉節約的生活方式已經過時了2)但是很多人反對這種說法3)你的看法是…,為什么?IsThriftStillaGoodVirtue?關于勤儉節約的英語作文-行文思路本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一種觀點,提綱第2點提出另外一種相反的觀點,提綱第3點要求談談“我”的觀點,由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。根據所給提綱,本文應包含如下內容:提出第1種觀點:節儉和樸素的生活方式已經過時了,并說明理由;提出第2種觀點:勤儉節約仍然是一種美德,并說明理由;表明“我”對節儉的看法,并說明理由。關于勤儉節約的英語作文-高分范文IsThriftStillaGoodVirtue?Withtheimprovementofthelivingstandards,manypeopleare[1]nolongerinterestedinthesimplelifestyle[2]andsomeofthemevenfeelashamedtobethrifty.Whattheypursueisthelatestfashion.Intheireyes,thriftisalreadyoutofstyle.However,stillotherpeopleinsistthatthriftisagoodvirtue.Theysaythattheunprecedentedpowerofproductiondoesn'tmeanthatweareentitledtoalifeofextravagance,becauseournatura1resourcesare1imited[2]andsomeofthemevenare[4]onthedecline.[5]Moreover,theyholdthatwastemayleadtodegradationofsocialatmosphereandenvironmentalpollutionaswell.[6]Astome,Ipreferthelatteropinion.Ibe1ieve[7]“Wastenot,wantnot.wThetruthofthissayingis[8]nottogiveupcomfortbuttoenhanceefficiency.[5]Infact,economicgrowthdependsenormouslyonsaving.[5]Besides,therearestillmillionsofChinese[9]livingunderpovertyline.Wecanneveraffordrecklesswaste.[5]Therefore,[10]itisnodoubtthatthriftisstillagoodvirtuethatweshouldnotgiveup.關于勤儉節約的英語作文【亮點點評】⑴“不再”。[2]表示遞進。[3]引出另外一種觀點。“在下降”。⑸過渡銜接詞語,使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。[6]用于引出自己的觀點或選擇。[7]引用諺語“儉以防匱”。[8]not...but連接并列結構,意為“不是…而是”。[9]現在分詞短語作后置定語。“毫無疑問”。關于勤儉節約的英語作文-佳句臨摹佳句:Ournaturalresourcesare1imitedandsomeofthemevenareonthedecline.臨摹:車禍使人們的財產遭受極大的損失,甚至還奪走了無數人的生命。佳句:Thetruthofthissayingisnottogiveupcomfortbuttoenhanceefficiency.臨摹:我們永遠都不應該低估自己的能力,而應該相信一句諺語:“有志者,事竟成「[KEY]Trafficaccidentshavecausedgreatdamagestopeople5spropertiesandeventakenawaythousandsofpeople5s1ives.Weshouldneverunderestimateourabilitiesbutshouldbelieveintheproverb:wWherethereisawi11,thereisaway.w關于節食減肥的英語作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnDieting.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheout1ine(giveninChinese)below:1)現在有越來越多人的選擇節食減肥,有的人是為了健康,但是更多的人是為了有一個苗條的身材2)分析節食減肥可能帶來的影響3)你的建議OnDieting關于節食減肥的英語作文-行文思路本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象并要求說明原因,提綱第2點要求分析這種現象可能帶來的影響,提綱第3點要求針對該現象提出“我”的建議,由此可判斷本文應為現象解釋型作文。根據所給提綱,本文應包含如下內容:描述越來越多的人節食的現象并分析主要原因;闡述節食不當可能帶來的影響;針對節食給出“我”的建議。關于節食減肥的英語作文-高分范文OnDietingNowadaysmoreandmorepeoplearebeginningtogoonadiet.Somepeopleareconcernedwiththeirhea1th,andtheygoonadietinordertoloseunwantedweight.Butstillothers,[1]especiallytheyoungwomen,arepayingtoomuchattentiontotheiroutwardappearance.They[2]becometheleadingnumberswhogoonadiet.]However,dietingmight[4]bringgreatnegativeeffectsonpeople.[3]Foronething,quitealotofpeopledon'treallyneeddietingtokeephea1th,andtheydietjustbecausetheywanttokeeps1im.Forthem,dieting[5]notonlyisuselessbutalsomightdamagetheirhea1th.[3]Foranother,somepeoplelackenoughknowledgeonhowtodietscientifically.[3]Asaresult,theyarelikelytosufferfrommalnutrition.[6]Consideringtheseriousdamageofunhea1thydieting,weshouldbecautiousindieting.[3]Inmyopinion,dieting,[7]forwhateverreasons,needsprofessiona1guidance.[8]Onlywithrightguidancecandietingwork[9]asweexpect.關于節食減肥的英語作文-【亮點點評】⑴“尤其”,表示強調。⑵“成為主力軍”。[3]過渡銜接詞語,使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。[4]用于引出對危害或負面影響的闡述。[5]“notonly...butalsow用于連接并列成分。⑹“考慮到,鑒于”,介詞。[7]"不管因為什么原因",whatever意為"無論什么“only+狀語”位于句首,引起句子部分倒裝。“像我們期望的那樣”。關于節食減肥的英語作文-佳句臨摹.佳句:Forthem,dietingnotonlyisuselessbutalsomightdamagetheirhealth.臨摹:基因技術不僅使動植物受益而且還有助于提高人類的生活質量。.佳句:Inmyopinion,dieting,forwhateverreasons,needsprofessionalguidance.臨摹:無論你的目標是什么,你都必須通過誠實的勞動來實現它。.佳句:Onlywithrightguidancecandietingworkasweexpect.臨摹:只有修滿足夠的學分,學生才能夠獲準畢業。[KEY]Genetictechnologyhelpsnotonlytheplantandanima1sbuta1sohumanbeingsto1iveahigherqualityWhateveryouraimis,youmustworkedhonestlytoattainit.Onlywhenadequatecreditshavebeenachievedcanstudentsgainthequalificationforgraduation.關于交通事故的英語作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicRoadAccidents.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1)交通事故會給人們的生命和財產帶來很大的損失2)分析交通事故發生的主要原因3)如何降低交通事故發生率RoadAccidents關于交通事故的英語作文-行文思路本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題,提綱第2點要求分析造成該問題的原因,提綱第3點要求說明解決該問題的方法,由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。根據所給提綱,本文應包含如下內容:指出道路事故的嚴重性及主要危害;分析導致道路事故的主要原因;說明應該如何降低道路事故的發生率。關于交通事故的英語作文-高分范文RoadAccidentsRoadaccidents,[1]asoneoftheimportantsocialproblems,haveaIwaysbeenpaidgreatconcern.Inmostofthebigcities,everyday,therehappenquiteafewroadaccidents.Intheseaccidents,manypeoplesuffergreatpropertylosses[2]andsomeofthemevenlosetheir1ives.[3]Thefollowingreasonscontributetoroadaccidents.[4]Aboveall,trafficisbecomingheavierandheavier,especiallyinbigcities.Moreandmorevehiclesonroad[5]increasethechancesofaccidents.[4]Inaddition,manydriverslacksafetyawarenessandevendon5tcomplywiththetrafficregulations.Forexample,somedriversrunthered1ightordriveafterbeingdrunk.[4]Besides,the[6]weaksupervisionandmanagementoftrafficcontrolsectorsisanoticeablereason.[7]Consideringtheseriousnessofthetrafficproblem,[8]itishightimeforustotakemoreeffectivemeasurestosolveit.[4]Firstly,thegovernmentshouldinvestmoremoneytoimprovepublictransportationandprovidemoretransportationwaysforpeopletochoose.[4]Secondly,stricterlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetopunishthosewhobreaktrafficregulations.[4]Fina1ly,driversshouldenhancesafetyawarenessanddevelopgooddrivingmanners.[9]Onlyinthiswaycouldroadaccidentsbeavoidedsuccessfully.關于交通事故的英語作文【亮點點評】[1]插入語,as意為"作為"。[2]表遞進。[3]用于引出原因。⑷過渡銜接詞語,使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。[5]“增加了…的機會或可能性”。[6]"監管不力",weak的使用準確地道。[7]“考慮到,鑒于”,介詞。⑻用于引出解決辦法,表示解決問題的緊迫性,常譯為“早該是…的時候了”。[9]“only+狀語”位于句首,引起句子部分倒裝。關于交通事故的英語作文-佳句臨摹.佳句:Intheseaccidents,manypeoplesuffergreatpropertylossesandsomeofthemevenlosetheir1ives.臨摹:一些人失敗后可能會變得灰心喪氣,甚至會放棄成功的希望。.佳句:Moreandmorevehiclesonroadincreasethechancesofaccidents.臨摹:許多學生認為考取更多的證書可以增加他們找工作的機會。.佳句:11ishightimeforustotakemoreeffectivemeasurestosolveit.臨摹:因此,我們早該關注一下人口過剩問題了。[KEY]Somepeople,afterafailure,maybecomediscouragedandevengiveuptheirhopeforsuccess.Manystudentsbelievethatmorecertificatesmayincreasethechancesoftheirbeingemployed.Therefore,itishightimewepaidspecialattentiontotheproblemofoverpopulation.(關于大學生就業難的英語作文Directions:Forthispart,youarea1lowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCollegeStudents,JobHunting.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheout1inegivenbelowinChinese:1)近年來出現大學生就業難的現象2)產生這一現象的原因3)如何解決這一問題關于大學生就業難的英語作文【思路點撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要求指出目前大學生就業難的現象,提綱第2點要求分析這種現象產生的原因,提綱第3點則要求闡述應該如何解決這一問題,由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。根據所給提綱,本文應包含以下內容:提出大學生就業難的現象,指出現象的表現;說明現象產生的原因,如大學生追求目標過高等;從幾個方面提出解決方法。關于大學生就業難的英語作文【參考范文】CollegeStudents5JobHuntingNowadays,theemploymentofcollegestudentsisbecomingmoreandmoreofaproblem.Aboutadecadeago,universitystudentscouldfindsatisfactoryandenviablejobsaftergraduation,whilethethingsarequitedifferentatpresent.Inaddition,accordingtostatistics,about30%ofgraduatestudentscan5tfindajobbutstayathomeaftergraduation0Employmentdifficultyofcollegestudentsisduetothefollowingreasons.Amongthese,theincreasingrecruitmentofcollegesanduniversitiesplaysavitalrole.Inaddition,manycollegesanduniversitiesfailtoadapttheircoursestothedevelopmentofeconomy,,Consideringtheseriousnessofunemploymentofcollegestudents,Ithinkitishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestosolvetheproblem.Aboveall,collegestudentsshouldrea1izetheirowndefectsandfurtherimprovethemselvestokeeptheircompetitiveedgeinsociety.Moreover,collegesoruniversitiesshouldprovidemoretrainingsandinternshipopportunitiesbeforethestudentsenterthesociety.Besides,collegestudentsshouldholdarightattitudetowardsjobsandsettheirjobexpectationsatasuitablelevel.Onlythroughthesewayscanthecollegestudentsfindasatisfactoryjobandhaveabrighterfuture。(關于大學生同居利與弊的英語作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMyViewonCollegeStudent5scohabitation.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheout1ine(giveninChinese)below:1)現在社會上的未婚同居現象相當普遍,大學生中也存在這種現象2)分析大學生同居的利與弊3)你怎樣看待大學生同居現象?為什么?關于大學生同居利與弊的英語作文【思路點撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象,提綱第2點要求分析該現象的利與弊,提綱第3點要求談談“我”對該現象的看法,由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。根據所給提綱,本文應包含如下內容:描述大學生中的未婚同居現象,引出對其的爭議;對比分析大學生同居的利與弊;表明“我”對大學生未婚同居現象的立場并說明理由。關于大學生同居利與弊的英語作文【參考范文】MyViewonCollegeStudents5CohabitationNowadays,premaritalcohabitationiscommonandpopularandthisphenomenonhasextendedtothecampus.Moreandmorecollegestudentloverschooseto1ivetogetheroffcampus.ThisphenomenonhasarousedgreatpublicconcernandtherearemuchdiscussiononitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesoAdmittedly,collegestudents5cohabitationhasitsadvantages.Oneofthemisthattheloverscanknoweachotherbetterbylivingtogether.Theycandecidewhethertheirromanticrelationshipshouldgoon.Secondly,cohabitationmaturescollegestudentsandimprovestheirsenseofresponsibi1ity.However,therearealsomanyproblemsresultingfromthecohabitationoncampus.Agoodexampletoi1lustratethispointisthatsomegirlsmightbehurtbytheirirresponsibleboyfriends.Besides,1ivingtogetherwi11involvemanytrivialthings,whichofcoursewi11influencetheirstudyoFrommypointofview,itisunwiseforcollegestudentloversto1ivetogetherduringtheireducation.Afterall,premaritalcohabitationisnotaneasything,whichistooearlyforcollegestudentswhoarenotmatureenough.Therefore,Isuggestthatthecollegestudentsshouldtakeloveseriouslyanddonotchooseto1ivetogetherbeforegradualion?關于電視選秀節目的英語作文Directions:Forthispart,youarea1lowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAttendingTVPKshowsdoes(ordoesnot)goodtoyoungpeople.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1)現在各種各樣的電視選秀節目吸引了許多年輕人2)為了實現明星夢,一些年輕人甚至放棄了學業,這種現象引起了許多關注3)你怎么看?為什么?關于電視選秀節目的英語作文【思路點撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點和第2點指出一種有爭議的現象,提綱第3點要求表明“我”對該現象的看法,由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。根據所給提綱,本文應包含如下內容:描述年輕人熱衷選秀節目的現象,引出對其的爭議;表明“我”對年輕人熱衷選秀節目的看法,并說明“我”的理由。關于電視選秀節目的英語作文【參考范文】AttendingTVPKShowsDoesNoGoodtoYoungPeopleNowadaysTVPKshowsaregreathitsinChinaandhaveattractedmanyyoungpeople.Someyoungstersevengiveuptheirstudiestoattendtheseshowsinthehopeofbecomingfamousovernight.Somepeoplethinktheseshowsprovideyoungpeoplemorechancetoshowtalents,whileothersbelievethatattendingtheseshowsdoesnogoodtotheyoungpeople.Asforme,Iprefertothelatteropinion。11shouldbeadmittedthatsomeyoungpeople1ikeLiyuchunhasstoodoutfromthenumerousattendantsinthePKshow,butthatdoesn,tmeanattendingthePKshowsisagoodwaytobecomesuccessfulforyoungpeople.Thefollowingreasonscansupportmyview.Firstly,TVPKshowsbreedrestlessnessandinduceyoungpeopletohuntafterfameatwhatevercost.Secondly,TVPKshowscansubverttheyoungsters,values.TheythinkattendingthePKshowsisashortcuttothesuccess,sotheymaydespisethewayofachievingsuccessbyhardwork.Finally,iftheyoungpeoplefailintheseshows,theywi11sufferapsychologica1unbalance.,Inaword,enteringforTVPKshowsisnotagoodwayforyoungpeopletomakeasuccess.IsuggestyoungpeopleshouldthinktwicebeforedecidingtoattendPKshowso關于大學生自助游的英語作文Directions:Forthispart,youarea1lowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSelfhelpTravelingofCollegeStudents.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1)大學生出去旅行經常會選擇“自助游”2)分析大學生選擇“自助游”的原因3)你的看法關于大學生自助游的英語作文【思路點撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象,提綱第2點要求分析這種現象產生的原因,提綱第3點要求談談“我”對該現象的看法,由此可判斷本文應為現象解釋型作文。根據所給提綱,本文應包含以下內容:簡單說明何謂“自助游”,描述大學生熱衷于“自助游”的現象;分析大學生選擇“自助游”主要原因;闡述"我"對"自助游”的看法。關于大學生自助游的英語作文【參考范文】Self-helpTravelingofCollegeStudentsSoca1ledself-helptravelingrefersthattravelersthemselvesarrangetravelroute,traveltime,anda11theothermattersduringtravel,withoutanyguideandteamleader.Nowadaysthiskindoftravelingmodelisgainingmoreandmorepopularityamongcollegestudents.Accordingtothesurvey,over80%ofcollegestudentspreferself-helptravelingtofollowingatourgroup?Whyarecollegestudentssofondofself-helptraveling?Aboveall,self-helptravelinggivestravelersmorefreedomandspace.Collegestudentsdon,tlikebeingrestricted.Theywanttoarrangetheirtravelastheywish.Moreover,self-helptravelingprovidescollegestudentsagoodchancetoimprovetheiradaptabi1ityandviabi1ity.Besides,theexpensesinself-helptravelingarecontrolledbytravelersthemselves.11isagoodchoiceforthosecollegestudentswhohavenotmuchmoneyfortheirdisposaLAsacollegestudent,Ienjoyself-helptravelingverymuch,andIhavebenefitedalotfromit.Foronething,Ihaveappreciatedmanyamazingscenerythatthosetravelerswhofollowtourgroupscannot.Foranother,self-helptravelhelpsmelearnhowtodea1withpeoplebettero關于網絡犯罪的英語作文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCyberCrimes.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheout1ine(giveninChinese)below:1)隨著互聯網的普及和應用,網絡犯罪開始擺在世人面前2)應該如何來打擊和預防網絡犯罪越來越成為人們必須要解決的一個難題3)作為大學生,你應該怎么做?關于網絡犯罪的英語作文【思路點撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題,提綱第2點指出解決該問題的緊迫性,提綱第3點要求談談大學生應該如何應對該問題,由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。根據所給提綱,本文應包含以下內容:描述網絡犯罪出現的背景及問題現狀;指出解決網絡犯罪問題的緊迫型,說明解決辦法;從大學生的角度談談應該如何應對網絡犯罪。關于網絡犯罪的英語作文【參考范文】CyberCrimes來源:考試大WiththepopularizationofInternet,cybercrimeshavebecomeaseriousproblemfacingus.Nowadayscybercrimina1sseemtobeeverywhereontheInternet.Toi1lustrate,somecommitfraudorliftintellectua1property,otherssnatchpasswordsordisrupte-commerce,andstillothersunleashvirusestocrashcomputers.Asaresult,thesecrimesdestroynetworksecuritygreatlyandmakecomputeruserssuffergreatlosses..However,weshouldn,ttoleratethesecybercrimina1sanymore.It'shightimeforustotakeeffectivemeasurestofightagainstcybercrimes.First,weshouldreinforcethecyberlawstopunishcybercriminalsstrictly.Moreover,weshoulddevelophightechniquesassoonaspossibletoimproveintrusiondetectionandpreventcybercrimes.Besides,moretalentedpeopleshouldbetrainedandmoreeffectivefirewallsshouldbebui11upsoastomakethenetimmunetoa11kindsofvirusesoAscollegestudents,wehaveresponsibi1itytojointhebattleagainstcybercrimes.Foronething,weshouldnotuseothers5computersunlesswegetpermission.Foranother,weshouldbehonesttoothersontheInternetandnotreleaseorspreadunrealinformation.Inaword,ittakesourcommoneffortstodefeatcybercrimeso關于大學生心理健康的英語作文Howtoimprovestudent'smentalhea1th1、大學生的心理健康十分重要2、因此,學校可以。.3、我們自己應當。.來源:考試大題目分析:學生的心理健康是近年來被熱議的話題之一,屬于經典的問題解決型,故不外乎采用舉例子,作比較,分類別,列數字,打比方等方式討論。參考范文:Students7menta1hea1thhasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Indeed,itiswidelyacceptedthatithasgainedgrowingpopularityamongpersonsinal1walksoflife.ThereisageneraldiscussiontodayabouttheissueofdisorderinbrainsoObviously,itisnecessarythateffectiveactionsshouldbetakentopreventproblems.Authoritiesinuniversitiesplayacriticalroleinthesituation.Tobeginwith,schools,suchascollegesoruniversities,canprovidechancesfortheyoungmentoeasetheirattention.What'smore,somearephysicallystrong,butpsychologica1problemsareabletobringpotentialthreats.Teachesmayhaveachancetofindtheminadvance.Besides,specialistsinthisfieldaretoberequiredtomakefullpreparationforcasesintime.Facingthecrisis,expertscandea1withitinaprofessiona1way,whichmeanstheyhavemoreorbetteropportunitiestosaveusthanothers.(學校)Fromthefactorsmentionedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthatwecanfreeourselvesfrommentali1Inessbytakingcertainprecautions.Forexample,ifyouhavepainsorpuzzlesinmind,findingafriendtoexpresstheseisagoodwaytoreleasepressure.Certainly,thereislittledoubtthatfurtherattentionwi11bepaidtotheissueo(我們)總結:potentialthreats潛在威脅ease減輕,舒緩psychologicalproblems心理問題precaution預防措施releasepressure釋放壓力playanimportant/criticalroleinsthitiswidelyacceptedthat Tobeginwith,What'smore,Besides,Fromthefactorsmentionedabovedrawtheconclusionthat等等均為經典模板句式!1Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:TurnoffYourCel1Phone.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheout1ine(giveninChinese)below:1、手機給我們的生活帶來了便利。2、但是手機鈴聲也會影響其他人。3、在某些場合請關掉你的手機。TurnoffYourCel1PhoneWiththedevelopmentofinformationtechnologyandreducedpriceofcommunicationproducts,themobilephonehasbecomeanecessityformostpeople.Obviously,itshortensthedistancebetweenpeopleandmakesourlifemoreconvenient.Thankstothecel1phone,it'seasyforustocontactorbecontactedbyothersanytimeandanywhere.Wewi11nevermissanyimportantmeetings,greatdealsoradmirableopportunities.However,haveyounoticedsometimesthecel1phonea1sobringsembarrassmenttous?It'snotraretoseesomeonepressingthecel1phonetohisearandshoutingloudlyinpublicasiftherewerenooneelsepresent.AndI'msureeachonehashadsuchanexperiencethatthecel1phoneringcontinuouslyonaforma1occasion.Perhapsthesepeoplehavemany1ife-and-deathreasonstokeepthephoneworkingatal1times,butitinterruptspeoplearoundthemwhohavetohearwhattheydon5tcarewhentheywanttoconcentrateonwhatthey,redoing.Soifyouareoneofthem,pleaseshutoffyourcel1phoneinpublic,especiallyonaquietandseriousoccasion.It'sarespectforbothothersandyourself.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:ThePost-graduateCraze.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)be1ow:1、目前很多人報考研(Q吧)究生。2、我認為形成這股熱潮的原因是 ThePost-graduateCrazeEachyear,mi1lionsofcollegestudentswi11sitinforthepost-graduateentranceexamination.Moreandmorestudentshaveregardedthepursuingofamasterdegreeasanindispensablepartoftheireducation.Whatistoaccountfortheirenthusiasmforapost-graduatediploma?First,itisthedemandofthetime.Inanageofknowledgeupdatingandinformationexplosion,whatyouhavelearnedincollegecanhardlymeetthedemandofsociety.Talentsofhighqua1itywhoareequippedwiththelatestknowledgeandskillwi11beneededmorethanever.Thatiswhymanystudentswi11furthertheirstudies.Second,weal1recognizethatthemore

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