1、高中英語學(xué)習(xí)提升課堂：如何寫好英文發(fā)言稿一、任務(wù)呈現(xiàn)你校將要舉辦一次主題為“愛我校園，爭創(chuàng)文明高中生”的活動。請按照 以下要點用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿：1 .孝敬父母，關(guān)心他人；2.保護(hù)環(huán)境，美化 校園；3.認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，營造良好的學(xué)習(xí)氣氛。要求：1 .符合發(fā)言稿的語言特點；.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；.詞數(shù)150左右。二、任務(wù)分析.該書面表達(dá)任務(wù)是就要點寫一篇發(fā)言稿，首先應(yīng)仔細(xì)審題，行文時不 可遺漏要點。.發(fā)言稿宜用短句，在論述時，可用排比、比照等修辭手法來增強(qiáng)說服 力和氣勢。.注意發(fā)言稿的語言特點和結(jié)構(gòu)特征，如稱謂、話題導(dǎo)入等；恰中選用發(fā) 言稿的經(jīng)典語句，如 Its my pleasure to

2、./ I feel it a great honor to .等。三、學(xué)生習(xí)作Good morning , everyone !Ifs my pleasure to give you a speech about doing something for my school, and its believed that everyone of us can make our school more attractive.First of all, we can do something to make our cam-pus more beautiful. Not only can each o

3、f us senior high school students plant a tree in the school, but also we can organize a complete cleaning on the campus.Whafs more, we are supposed to protect the facilities in our school. Leaving the classroom, we should never forget to turn down the light and close the door.Last but not least, we

4、are supposed to respect our parents and teachers; its virtue to respect eldership.Only in these ways can we turn our school into an attractive place to study and live in.Thanks for your attention !四、教師點評.錯誤評析根據(jù)語境可知，此句意為“我們決不能忘記關(guān)燈和門”，關(guān)燈應(yīng)當(dāng)用固 定短語turn off，turn down”意為“將音量調(diào)低,拒絕”。.亮點展示作者能緊扣要點框架適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，文中銜

5、接詞語，如First of all, whats move, Last but not least等的使用使文章前后連貫，承接自然。倒 裝句，it作形式主語的結(jié)構(gòu)等句式的使用也給文章增色不少。文章要點齊全，用詞準(zhǔn)確，論述有理有據(jù)，寫作層次清楚，時態(tài)、語 態(tài)正確，語言流暢，符合發(fā)言稿的語言特點，較好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。五、英文發(fā)言稿的寫作指導(dǎo).熟悉文體特點英語發(fā)言稿是高考書面表達(dá)題經(jīng)常考查的文體，常要求考生以參加演講 比賽、針對某事表達(dá)自己看法和意見等撰寫，是一種常見的應(yīng)用文體。.掌握格式特征發(fā)言稿通常由三局部組成，即呼語、正文和結(jié)束語，其中開頭和結(jié)尾格 式較固定。一般由 Its my pleas

6、ure to /I feel it a great honor to.等引 入主題；結(jié)尾用 Thats all .Thank you for listening. /Thanks for your attention等結(jié)束發(fā)言。.合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)分三局部寫作：第一局部提出本人要談的問題及對問題的看法悌二局部 為主體，需運用各種方法及材料來論證你的觀點，常用到的連接成分有： to begin with, in addition, finally等；尾段照應(yīng)開頭，總結(jié)全文。.恰中選用經(jīng)典語句發(fā)言稿有歡迎辭、演講稿等不同的類型，行文時需針對不同的類型選用 恰當(dāng)?shù)慕?jīng)典語句。如在羅列觀點時可用My pers

7、onal opinions on . are as follows./Here are my personal opinions on 等。在歡迎（送）類發(fā)言稿上可用 Lets give our best regards and respects to./ Please take our kind respects to. /Before leaving, I should like to take this opportunity to express my sincere thanks for 等在宣講類發(fā)言 稿中可用 As we all know./Only in this way./ It is my honor to ./Let m