1、CET-42022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved2第一部分 寫作分值及評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)介紹; 第二部分 寫作步驟; 厘清思路,把握文章結(jié)構(gòu) 注意表達(dá),用亮點(diǎn)詞句得高分第三部分 寫作模板第四部分 熱點(diǎn)話題及平時(shí)練習(xí)2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved3第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作寫作介紹:1. 分值 15%2. 考試時(shí)長 30分鐘 3. 考試時(shí)間 9:10-9:40(如果有可能,盡量在9:35分監(jiān)考老師提醒時(shí)完成草稿,并填到答題卡一上,給聽力預(yù)留5分鐘時(shí)間)4. 大綱要求:選用考生所熟悉的題材,要求考生根據(jù)所提供

2、的信息及提示(如:提綱,情景,圖片或圖表等)寫出一篇短文,四級120-180詞; 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved4第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作5. 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved5第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作漂漂亮亮 (14分)， 清清爽爽（11分），馬馬虎虎（8分），糊里糊涂（5分）， 一塌糊涂（2分）2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved6第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作寫作練習(xí):一. 厘清思路二. 注意表達(dá) (1)換詞 (2)套句 (3)

3、背篇三. 主要考查三種題型2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved7第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作第一步: 厘清思路,把握文章結(jié)構(gòu)! 3* 92022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved8第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作第一步: 厘清思路,把握文章結(jié)構(gòu)!eg. Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see tha

4、t thousands of people- man and woman, old and young-ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called the kindom of bicycles. 總-分-總格式2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved9第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作第二步: 注意表達(dá),用亮點(diǎn)詞句得高分!換詞 popular(adj.)- popularity(n.) years(n.)-decade(n.) the young(n.)-youngst

5、ers(n.) people(n.)-citizen(n.) idea/opinion(n.)-concept(n.) in the modern times-in the contemporary society in the present-day society in this day and age 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved10第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作換形容詞形容詞good = conducive =beneficial=advantageousbad = detrimental= baneful =undesirable

6、surprising = amazing = extraordinary = miraculousbeautiful = attractive = gorgeous = eye-catching poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-stricken rich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-off top = excellent = eminent = outstanding 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved11第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作 換動詞動詞 i

7、mprove = enhance= promote = strengthen = optimize cause = trigger = endanger solve =resolve =address = tackle =cope with = deal with destroy = tear down = knock down = eradicate develop = cultivate = foster = nurture=nourish encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur think = assert= hold = claim = argu

8、e complete = fulfill = accomplish= achieve keep = preserve = retain = hold=maintain=sustain destroy = impair = undermine = jeopardize=ruin reduce=ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved12第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作換名詞名詞(1)influence= impact danger = perils =hazard pollution =

9、 contaminationhuman beings= mankind = human raceold people= the old = the elderly = the aged = senior citizenshappiness = cheerfulness = well-being eachers = instructors = educators = lecturers education = schooling = =upbringing2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved13第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作換名詞名詞(2)young

10、people = youngsters = youths = adolescentsadvantage = merits = superiority = virtueresponsibility = obligation = duty = liabilityability = capacity = power = skill job = career = employment = profession enjoyment = pastimes = recreation= entertainment children = offspring = descendant= kid2022-4-8co

11、pyright 2006 All Rights Reserved14第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作換短語短語be filled with = be awash with = be inundate with = be saturated withstruggle for = aspire after = strive for = spare no efforts for embark on = take up = set about = go in for=engage in in contemporary society = in present-day society= in this day

12、 and age a host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved15第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作套句eg. Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people- man and w

13、oman, old and young-ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called the kindom of bicycles.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved16第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作套句Bicycles are very popular in China. 此句為主旨句,起總起全文的作用可套用此句型,把主語按照要求進(jìn)行改變即可,如 Online shopping is very popular in China. Watching movie

14、is very popular in Wuhan Hubei Province, China.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved17第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作套句Bicycles are very popular in China. In China, bicycles have gained great/wired popularity among Chinese people.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved18第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作套句2011-06: 現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時(shí)尚20

15、10-06: 如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫2009-12: 建設(shè)綠色校園很重要2009-06: 越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對外開放的目的是為什么? 2008-12: 一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用 2008-06: 娛樂活動多種多樣2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved19第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作 套句 2011-06: 現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時(shí)尚 In the recent decade, online shopping has gained wide popularity among youngsters.2022-4-8copyright 200

16、6 All Rights Reserved20第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作 套句 2010-06: 如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫 In China, English learning has gained wide popularity among students. However,.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved21第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作 套句 2009-12: 建設(shè)綠色校園很重要 In the contemporary society, the concept of green campuses has gained wide

17、 popularity among universities or colleges.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved22第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作 套句 2009-06: 越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對外開放的目的是為什么? In the present-day society, free admission to museums is engjoying great popularity among Chinese citizens.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved23第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作

18、 套句 2008-12: 一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用 During the past decades, disposable plastic baged gained wide popularity among people in the whole world.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved24第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作 套句 2008-06: 娛樂活動多種多樣 In this day and age, a variety of recreational activities have gained wide popularity amon

19、g individuals.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved25第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作套句 試著翻譯一句歌詞: 你在我眼里是最美! eg. In my eyes, you are the most beautiful. In my eyes, no one is more beautiful than you. 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved26第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作套句 句型提煉: No is/are more than .原句: Bicycles are very popula

20、r in China. In China, no means of transport is more popular and important than bicycles. 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved27第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作套句再試著翻譯一句歌詞:我能想到最浪漫的事,就是和你一起慢慢變老!I can think the most romantic thing is growing old with you! In my eyes, no romance is more romantic than aging with you

21、minute by minute, year by year and millennium by millennium.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved28第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作背篇四級作文主要考查的幾種形式為: 議論文議論文(對比選擇對比選擇, 現(xiàn)象解釋現(xiàn)象解釋,問題解決及原因問題解決及原因解釋解釋)-陳述現(xiàn)象陳述現(xiàn)象,解釋現(xiàn)象解釋現(xiàn)象,總結(jié)現(xiàn)象總結(jié)現(xiàn)象; 圖表題圖表題-陳述圖表所示現(xiàn)狀陳述圖表所示現(xiàn)狀,解釋原因解釋原因,總結(jié)總結(jié); 信件題信件題-注意信件格式注意信件格式; 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Righ

22、ts Reserved29第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作背篇議論文模版(一) When it comes to the issue of , different people have different opinions. (進(jìn)一步介紹這種現(xiàn)象或觀點(diǎn)).Some people think that . They hold this opinion because (they think) . Others, however, take a negative / positive attitude to . (Others, nevertheless, are more pessimistic /

23、 optimistic about it). From their point of view, . Besides, . 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved30第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作 In my opinion/Personally /From my point view /If asked my attitude, I am more in favor of . I stand in / hold this attitude /opinion / view because . Its true that , but it doesnt

24、mean that . Therefore / In a word/ In short, . Instead, we should .2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved31第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作背篇議論文模版(二) In recent years, （描寫現(xiàn)狀或趨勢）. This has caused a lot of problems. First, （結(jié)果1）. For example, （細(xì)節(jié)，說明結(jié)果1）. Second, （結(jié)果2）. （細(xì)節(jié)，說明結(jié)果2）. Finally, （結(jié)果3）. （細(xì)節(jié)，說明結(jié)果3）. Since is

25、 such a serious problem, we should take effective measures to . First, we should （措施1）. Besides, （措施2）. And finally, （措施3）.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved32第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作Try to write a passage according to the template 2 given above. Dear Andy- How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We b

26、oth miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time you computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat. Love, Mom and Dad.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved33第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作 In recent years/In this day and age/ In the contemporary society

27、, computer using/Internet/surfing online has gained a wide popularity among youngsters. Most people consider it as convenient. Though this has caused/triggered a lot of problems/issues. 第一段第一段 總起總起,講述現(xiàn)象講述現(xiàn)象 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved34第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作 First/Firstly/First of all, electro

28、nic communication is less direct than face-to-face communication. For example, if you type on your computer to discuss an issue with your friend, it would cost you more time than just saying it to him or her face to face. Words can never convey the full message, and instant messages usually cause mi

29、sunderstanding. Second/Secondly/Further more, we are not robots, sometimes we just need to talk to a real human being rather than only a picture on the computer. Only when we talk face to face with gestures, can we express our fellings completely. In fact, face-to-face communication but not electron

30、ic communication makes us feel connected. 第二段第二段 表達(dá)對此現(xiàn)象的理表達(dá)對此現(xiàn)象的理解解, 并給出原因并給出原因2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved35第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作 Since indulging in /addicting to computer is such a serious problem, we should take effective measures to prevent the youngsters from addicting. We shouldnt spend

31、too much time online rather than relating to people in the real world. 第三段第三段 總結(jié)總結(jié),表明自己的態(tài)度表明自己的態(tài)度, 希望或方向希望或方向2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved36第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作背篇議論文模版(三) Nowadays, great importance has been attached to （目前的現(xiàn)象及存在的問題）. Many ways can contribute to (要解決的問題), but the following ones

32、 may be effective. First of all, （方法1）. Besides, （方法2）.Finally, （方法3）. In conclusion/ To sum up, the ways I have mentioned above should never be separated from each other. （希望）. 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved37第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作背篇議論文模版(四) Recently there has been a tremendous growth in （指出第一次數(shù)

33、據(jù)變化）. What amazes us most is （第二次數(shù)據(jù)變化）. It is true that （點(diǎn)明變化趨勢）. There are many reasons explaining . The main reason is . Whats more, . Thirdly , . As a result, . Considering all this, I believe （指出大學(xué)生在使用計(jì)算機(jī)中有困難和問題）. For one thing, (困難一）. For another, （困難二）. In conclusion, （提 出建議）. 2022-4-8copyrigh

34、t 2006 All Rights Reserved38第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作背篇議論文模版(五) Date Dear ., I am very glad to hear that you want to seek some suggestions about_ in order to . From my point of view, . Also, to you, I highly recommend that . On one hand, . On the other hand, . Besides, it is unnecessary for you to . Consequentl

35、y, I believe that . I hope that my opinions are of help to yo, and please feel free to contact with me for more questions. Sincerely Yours, . 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved39第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作四種最常見話題分類一. 教育 1. 大學(xué)開設(shè)的專業(yè)應(yīng)該由誰決定 2. 大學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何面對剛?cè)雽W(xué)的困難 3. 實(shí)踐課是否應(yīng)該取代文化課 4.學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該為社區(qū)作義工 5.學(xué)生是住校好還是與父母同住好 6.

36、 大學(xué)是理科重要還是文科重要 7.如何看待年輕人喜歡購物的現(xiàn)象2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved40第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作四種最常見話題分類二.社會生活 1. 博物館的功能 2.尊重老年人 3.人們?nèi)绾巫錾剖?4.是否只有政府能夠解 決住房問題 5. 政府是否應(yīng)該支持運(yùn)動員 6.年輕人的失業(yè)問題 7.是否應(yīng)該鼓勵老年人退休 8.公司是否應(yīng)該提供醫(yī) 療服務(wù) 9.青少年犯罪問題 10.老年人數(shù)量增加的 問題 11.繳稅 12.時(shí)尚2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved41第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作四

37、種最常見題型分類三. 科技影響 1.圖書是否被電腦所取代2. 外來媒體的影響3. 手機(jī)對人們生活的影響4. 電腦可以翻譯外文,因此不需要學(xué)習(xí)外語5. 監(jiān)視器的廣泛使用6. 電視機(jī)使家人關(guān)系疏遠(yuǎn)7.使用機(jī)器人的利弊8.航空運(yùn)輸是否應(yīng)該被限制9.登月是否對日常生活有影響2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved42第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作 四種最常見題型分類 四. 文化傳統(tǒng) 1. 國際旅游的利弊 2.房屋的建筑風(fēng)格 3. 文化的融合是否促進(jìn)城市發(fā)展 4. 學(xué)習(xí)語言是否應(yīng)該了解其文化 5. 是否應(yīng)該鼓勵穿傳統(tǒng)服裝 6. 移民后人們是否應(yīng)該接受新文化,還是組

38、成自己的小圈子2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved43第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作 三種其它類型話題 一.生物與環(huán)境 1. 提高燃料價(jià)格與環(huán)境問題的關(guān)系 2.動物實(shí)驗(yàn)是否該禁止 3.我們應(yīng)該如何對待動物 4. 我們?nèi)绾慰创鐣?問題2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved44第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作三種其它類型話題二.男女平同等1. 男女領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的管理風(fēng)格2. 女子是否應(yīng)該被指定作高層3. 學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該招收同等數(shù)量的男女生2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserve

39、d45第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作三種其它類型話題三. 政府及抽象話題1. 歷史能否幫助我們2. 幸福是由什么決定的3. 富國是否應(yīng)該給窮國幫助4. 政府是否應(yīng)該花錢購買武器2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved46第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作平時(shí)練習(xí) （brain storm）1. 以話題為中心詞進(jìn)行拓展 hardworking tired money experience exercise good habit ability wide view optimistic stress pressure load waste study time sp

40、eaking ability practicing ability happy make friedns improvement confident solve problem gain knowledge communicationpart-time job2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved47第一部分第一部分 寫作寫作平時(shí)練習(xí) （brain storm）2. 以單詞為中心，展開寫句子 Hardworking is very hard for me. I often get tired. But I can earn money from that. Except for this,