1、高中英語必修二unit2writing-精品課件Enjoy some pictures. Do you know these athletes? What sport are they good at?basketballJordanfootball/soccerMessitennisLi Natable tennis/ping-pongZhang YiningbadmintonLin DangymnasticsLi XiaopengswimmingSun YangrunningLiu Xiang1.Whats your favorite sport? 2.When&why do yo

2、u like this sport?3. What do you do to improve your skill?4. Who is your favorite athlete? 5. Whats your hope or dream?A. Whats your favorite sport? B: I like_best.A: When & why do you like this sport? B:I became interested in_ when I was_ I like_ because_A:What do you do to improve your skill?

3、B: I often practice it_A:Who is your favorite athlete? B: My favorite athlete is_ I like _because_ A: Whats your hope or dream? B: I hope in the future I can_單元寫作單元寫作- My Favorite Sport 如何描寫最喜歡的一項運動如何描寫最喜歡的一項運動 (說明文說明文,可穿插記敘和討論可穿插記敘和討論) My Favorite Sport Of all sports, I like badminton best. I becam

4、e interested in it when I was a kid. I am fond of playing badminton because it can not only build our bodies, but also train our brains. Therefore, I join the Badminton Club in our school. To improve my skill, I often practice it whenever Im free. Besides, I play games with my friends after school.

5、My favorite athlete is Lin Dan, who is a world champion. I admire him because he is so skillful with the ball. Although I am not good enough now, I really hope I will be a good player like him in the future. 第一步：第一步： My Favorite Sport Of all sports, I like badminton best. I became interested in it w

6、hen I was a kid. I am fond of playing badminton because it can not only build our bodies, but also train our brains. Para1 what, when and why Therefore, I join the Badminton Club in our school. To improve my skill, I often practice it whenever Im free. Besides, I play games with my friends after sch

7、ool.Para2 how to improve My favorite athlete is Lin Dan, who is a world champion. I admire him because he is so skillful with the ball. Although I am not good enough now, I really hope I will be a good player like him in the future.Para3 favorite athlete & dream第二步：第二步：1. Of all the sports, I li

8、ke . best.2.I became interested in . when I was . At the age of ., I showed great interest in .3. I like/am fond of/fall in love with . because . The reason why I like . is that .4. I often practice it . Whenever I have time/I am free, .5. My favorite athlete is . I like because .6. I hope I can . i

9、n the future . I really want to be a(n) . when I grow up.最喜歡的運動最喜歡的運動喜歡該運動的時間喜歡該運動的時間喜歡該運動的原因喜歡該運動的原因現怎么從事現怎么從事/提高該運動提高該運動最喜歡的運動員最喜歡的運動員夢想夢想第三步：第三步：遞進遞進besides, whats more, in addition not onlybut also對等對等on one hand, on the other hand, 讓步讓步although, even though/if, whenever因果因果so, thus, therefore 轉

10、折轉折however, but 列舉列舉such as, for example并列并列also, as well總結總結altogether, all in all, in a word.e.g.“喜歡喜歡” like, love, be fond of, fall in love with, have a fancy for, be crazy about when引導時間狀語從句引導時間狀語從句I became interested in when I was同位語、表語從句同位語、表語從句The reason why I like .(同位語)is that .Pay attentio

11、n to： spelling mistakes(拼寫錯誤) logical and grammatical mistakes(邏輯、語法錯誤)第四步：第四步：查漏補缺查漏補缺(check the mistakes)題目：My Favorite Sport要求：字數100左右 限時15分鐘 自評自評+互評互評 15 Main points(要點齊全語句通順要點齊全語句通順) 5 Structures(結構緊湊過渡自然結構緊湊過渡自然) 3 Words &Sentences (高級詞匯句式多樣高級詞匯句式多樣) 3 Handwriting (書寫工整美觀書寫工整美觀) 1 Paragrap

12、hs (分段分段) 鏈接鏈接:高考英語作文評分標準高考英語作文評分標準25檔次檔次語法結構、詞語法結構、詞匯匯復雜結構、高復雜結構、高級詞匯級詞匯連接成分與結構連接成分與結構寫作目的完成情寫作目的完成情況況第五檔第五檔（2125分）分）應用較多應用較多語法結構或詞匯語法結構或詞匯有些許錯誤有些許錯誤有效使用連接全文有效使用連接全文結構緊湊結構緊湊完全達到完全達到第四檔第四檔（1620分）分）滿足要求滿足要求語法結構或詞匯語法結構或詞匯方面基本準確方面基本準確簡單使用連接全文簡單使用連接全文結構緊湊結構緊湊達到達到第三檔第三檔（1115分）分）滿足要求滿足要求語法結構或詞匯語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤有一方面的錯誤有一些，但不影響理些，但不影響理解解簡單使用連接全文簡單使用連接全文內容連貫內容連貫基本達到基本達到第二檔第二檔（610分）分）語法單調，詞匯語法單調，詞匯有限有限語法結構或詞匯語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤有一方面的錯誤有一些，影響對寫作些，影響對寫作內容的理解內容的理解較少使用連接成分，較少使用連接成分，內容缺少連貫內容缺少連貫信息未能清楚地傳信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者達給讀者第一檔第一檔（15分）分）語法單調，詞匯語法單調，詞匯有限有限語法結構或詞匯語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤較多，方面的錯誤較多，影響對寫作內容影響