讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)在寫(xiě)作中的應(yīng)用Objective：學(xué)會(huì)在寫(xiě)作中運(yùn)用無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)。概念1.導(dǎo)入Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.1949witnessedtheestablishmentofChina.OurschoolhallwillseethelectureonTangpoetry.Thethickfogblanketedthefield.Couragedesertedher.＊句子采用“無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)”(inanimatesubject)，表示抽象概念、心理感覺(jué)、事物名稱或時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等，但謂語(yǔ)卻常常使用“有靈動(dòng)詞”(animateverb)。表示人或社會(huì)團(tuán)體的動(dòng)作和行為，這類句子往往帶有擬人化(personification)的修辭色彩?！盁o(wú)靈主語(yǔ)+有靈動(dòng)詞”原因Ihavelearntfromlifethatsuccessisnotfinal.SoIalwaysstayhumbleandneverletitgotomyhead.________________thatsuccessisnotfinal.SoIalwaysstayhumbleandneverletitgotomyhead.避免重復(fù)Therehasbeenanincreaseinviolencefromillegalgunsinthepast2years._________________________anincreaseinviolencefromillegalguns.增添生動(dòng)性Ifwerelytoomuchonmouseclicking,itwillmakeuslazierbothmentallyandphysically._________________________makes

uslazierbothmentallyandphysically.簡(jiǎn)潔Wecarriedoutmoreexperimentsandfoundsomeexcitingresults.__________________________gaveussomeexcitingresults.目的II.無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)種類(Observe&Summarize)Group1:Panicseizedher.Despairchokedherwords.Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverhim.Fearslowlycreepsuponher.Summary1：主語(yǔ)是__________________名詞(aburst/wave/sense/feelingof+)表示情感狀態(tài)的名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞表示“某人感到...”或“一陣/一種....向某人襲來(lái)”常見(jiàn)表情緒的名詞：_______________________________________________________________常見(jiàn)的有靈謂語(yǔ)：___________________侵襲，突然控制__________________使哽咽__________________使大受感動(dòng)、涌上心頭______________不知不覺(jué)地產(chǎn)生________________緊抓________________襲來(lái)、席卷________________遺棄________________撕碎_(kāi)_____________吞淹沒(méi)__________________擊垮_______________剝奪、使喪失_______________失去缺乏Practice:1.一陣恐慌向她襲來(lái)。Awaveofpanic______her.2.我抱著禮物，興奮得什么話也說(shuō)不出來(lái)。Iheldthepresent,andexcitement________mywords3.她的焦慮把她撕成了碎片。（她焦慮不安）Anxiety_________herintopieces.4.那些日子里，一種沮喪攫住了我。Adepression_______methosedays.A.chokedB.seizedC.sweptoverD.tore名著中的無(wú)靈主語(yǔ):(1)____________________________,andIfellsobbingonthedoorstep.JaneEyre絕望擊垮了我，我倒在門(mén)階上哭泣。(2)Maryfelt___________________________.TheSecretGarden瑪麗感到一陣憤怒。Group2：1.Huaibei_____________greatchangesinrecentyears.淮北見(jiàn)證了最近幾年的的巨大變化。2.Thefollowingyear____thedeathofhismother.第二年他的媽媽去世了。3.Thetown______abeautifullake.這個(gè)鎮(zhèn)引以為榮的是有個(gè)美麗的湖。Summary2：主語(yǔ)是表示______________名詞常見(jiàn)的謂語(yǔ)：_________(見(jiàn)證）,______充滿,see______________,_______有引以為榮的事物Practice:例句:1.上海發(fā)生了許多重大的歷史事件。Shanghaiwitnessedmanygreathistoricalevents.仿寫(xiě)：

下一刻見(jiàn)證了他們做早餐的努力，最終他們做到了。______________________________theireffortstomakethebreakfastandtheyeventuallymadeit.例句2：(2021年全國(guó)I卷)早餐的香味彌漫在廚房的空氣中。Thesmellofbreakfastfilledtheairinthekitchen.仿寫(xiě)：

每個(gè)人都欣喜若狂，院子里洋溢著喜悅。1)Everyonewas__________________,with__________________theyard.(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))2)Everyonewas__________________,__________________theyard.(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu))Group3：1.Thethickfog_________thefield.濃霧籠罩著整個(gè)大地。2.Anearthquake______likeathiefinthenight,withoutwarning.地震到來(lái)，猶如夜賊，不作預(yù)告。3.Therain__________touristsfromenjoyingthefullmoon.雨使得游客無(wú)法欣賞到滿月。Summary4：主語(yǔ)是表示____________等名詞常見(jiàn)謂語(yǔ)：blanket____________,e,arrive,bring,prevent,threaten,hit,strike＊(B3U4)therewasfrostontheground,confirmingthatautumnhadarrivedinCanada.Group4：1.Herface

________________whenIgaveherthepresent.我給她禮物時(shí)，她的臉上煥發(fā)出了光彩。2.Laughter_________aroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里縈繞。3.Whenhesawthefamiliarhandwriting,tears_________inhiseyes.他一看到熟悉的字跡，便熱淚盈眶Summary4:主語(yǔ)是表示___________________的名詞常見(jiàn)的謂語(yǔ)：___________/__________煥發(fā)光彩,________繼續(xù)存留、縈繞,_________涌出,_________滾下_______掠過(guò)、閃現(xiàn)Practice:1.怒火涌上他的心頭。_______(主語(yǔ))___________(有靈動(dòng)詞）withinhim.2.當(dāng)她看到草莓的時(shí)候,幸福的淚水從她臉頰流下。Whenshesawthestrawberries,___________________________________________hercheeks.Group5：1.Aterriblethoughtsuddenly_________________me.我突然想到一個(gè)可怕的想法。2.Thesightofthescene_____________mewithhorror.想到這個(gè)情景我心中充滿了恐懼。Summary5:主語(yǔ)是表示______________的名詞常見(jiàn)的表示行為或動(dòng)作的名詞有如sight,thought,glance,look,idea,feeling等。常見(jiàn)謂語(yǔ)：________擊打,_______喚起,remind________,delight________,frighten________,____________壓倒,____________使震驚.....Practice:1.Atdusk,hewascryinginthestreet.Dusk__________himcryinginthestreet.2.Iforgothisnameatthemoment.Hisname_______________(被忘掉，被忽視）meatthemoment.3.Hesuddenlylosthisconfidencewhenhehadtospeak.Hisconfidencesuddenly____________（背離，使失望）himwhenhehadtospeak.Summary:①無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)可以是動(dòng)作、_________、_________、_________、_________、等②表達(dá)公式：___________+______________+其他III.鞏固與練習(xí)Practice:請(qǐng)把下列有靈主語(yǔ)句改為無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句。Hefeltnervous______________________________________________________.2.Hefelthorrible.______________________________________________________.3.IwassoastonishedthatIcouldn’tsayasingleword._____________________________________.4.Hefeltveryanxious.______________________________________________________________5.Ifeltsad.________________________________________6.Iwasdisappointed.一陣絕望占據(jù)了我的內(nèi)心._________________________________.7.突然之間，雙胞胎的臉亮了起來(lái)，他們的頭堅(jiān)定地點(diǎn)著。_______________,thetwins’face_____________withtheirhead___________firmly.8.他站在門(mén)邊，臉上露出喜色。He_________bythedoorandhis___________________________withdelight/joy.9.一見(jiàn)到他的老朋友，一種幸福的感覺(jué)席卷了他。________________hisoldfriend,___________________________________him.10.比賽前，她突然失去了信心。（sthfailsb)Beforethecontest,her_____________suddenly___________her.11.簡(jiǎn)臉色蒼白，一陣恐懼襲上心頭。(seize/takeholdof/sweepover)Jane’sfaceturnedpaleand______________________________________her.12.她絕望得心都要被撕碎了。Her________was_______intopieceswithdespair.=____________________herintopieces實(shí)戰(zhàn)練習(xí)八省聯(lián)考2續(xù)寫(xiě)部分電梯驚魂P(guān)ara1:

Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.

1.（兩個(gè)無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)單句+以時(shí)間為平行主語(yǔ)的再次夸張的描述：時(shí)間彷佛凝固了一樣。）Timeseemedto________andeveryminutefeltlike_____________.2.（with結(jié)構(gòu)+二連動(dòng)：+回扣尾段Mrs.Lim此刻的表現(xiàn)狀況）However,withmyhelp,MrsLimmanagedtobreathesmoothlyandgraduallycontrolledheremotions.

3.(with結(jié)構(gòu)：+再次撥打911確認(rèn)）Indespair,Idialed911onceagainwithmy___________(顫抖的)fingers.wordbank4.（賓語(yǔ)從句：+急救人員火速向我們趕來(lái)）Andwewerereassured_____emergencyresponderswere__________towardsus.（Doing非謂語(yǔ)：+得知救援隊(duì)在路上，大感寬慰）_________(know)arescueteamwasontheway,Ifeltaheavy______(擔(dān)子)takenoffourmind.6.(Doing非謂語(yǔ)：+我仍然安慰Mrs.Lim,堅(jiān)信我們回脫困）Holdingherhandstightly,Iforted/consoledMrsLimconstantly,believingthatwewoulddefinitelygetout.(簡(jiǎn)單句：+耐心等待專業(yè)救援）Wecoulddonothingbutwaitforprofessionalaidpatientlyintheliftcar.Para2:Bang!MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheothersideoftheliftdoor.1.（獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)：+激動(dòng)得心都要跳出來(lái)了）Hope________(ignite),myheartalmost__________(leap)outofmychest.2.(兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句：+感嘆）Oursaviorseventuallyarrived!Mrs.Limbreathed/heavedasighof___________(relieve).3.（定語(yǔ)從句：我呼救，引起關(guān)注）Iscreamedforhelpatthetopofmylungs,________attractedtheirattentionimmediately.4.(無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句：救援人員的安撫）Theircalmand________(assure)voicecameintoourears“Trustusandyouwillgetout.”5.Itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheyassessedthesituationandlaunchedtheirrescueworkinanorganizedway.6.（兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句：+電梯門(mén)打開(kāi)，我們脫困）Theliftdoor______________(open)andwewerefreeagain!7.（簡(jiǎn)單句：+回扣原文第一段今天可是多事的一天）Todaywasabsolutelyaneventfulday，__________athrillingstoryplayedoutinadarkliftcar!Wordbank:1.Witheverytickoftimepassingby2.horrormingledwi