Mylittlesister,Meg,saidthatshewasn’tafraidofthedarkanymoreandshe’dbeOKstayingwithAuntLilyinthecountry.“Aslongasyou’rethere,Mike,”shehadsaid.Still,Mumwasworried.Meghadneversleptawayfromhome,awayfromthecity.SoItoldMumIcouldhandleeverything.Eventhoughwewereonlystayingovernight,Meghadbroughtsixbooks—allaboutfairies

(仙女).Afterweunpacked,AuntLilyinvitedustopicksomeflowers.Aswefollowedherthroughtheforest,Megheldmyhandtightly.Butoncewereachedthesunlitgrassland,sheletgo.“Butterflies!”whisperedMeg.Shescreamedwithdelightwhenoneflewnearher.妹妹說不再怕黑，愿意和阿姨住在鄉(xiāng)下。打開行李陽光普照的草原妹妹帶了6本關(guān)于仙女的書，見到蝴蝶很開心。MaybeIhadnothingtoworryabout,Ithought.IstillrememberedwhenIwasherelastsummer,Ifoundsomeamazinginsects,likefireflies

(螢火蟲)andwalkingstickswhichI’dneverseeninthecity.“Fairiesaremagical.Seethesebeautifulflowerstheygrow!”shekepttellingabsolutelyeverythingsheknewaboutfairies.Iwasgladthatifshekeptitupuntilbedtime,thenmaybeshe’dfallrighttosleep.這里有些神奇的動物，比如螢火蟲。妹妹不停地講她所知道的關(guān)于仙女的一切。Megdidkeepchatting,rightthroughsupper.Thenthesunbegantoset.“Doesitgetreallydarkouthereatnight”sheasked.Hereyeswerefixedonthewindow.“Sure,butwe’vegotplentyoflightsinside,”saidAuntLily.SheleanedoverandgaveMegawarmsmile.ButIcouldtellshewasstillworried.“Icouldreadtoyou.”太陽下山，妹妹有些怕黑。阿姨安慰妹妹，我給妹妹讀書。Ihadn’tevenfinishedapagewhenherbottomlipstartedshakingslightly.“Mike,”shesaid,hereyesstartingtofill.“Iwanttogohome.”Iquicklysearchedthroughherbookforsomethingtokeepherfromcrying.Thebookfellopentoapagethatwasdog-earedfromuse,apagethatwasobviouslyoneofMeg’sfavorites.Thetextread:“Amongthetreesdeepintheforest,thelightsoffairiesgleam(閃爍).”Aha!HowcouldIforgetthose“tinyfairies”outthere妹妹害怕黑，想回家，哭起來。在森林深處的樹林中，仙女的光芒閃爍書里講到仙女發(fā)光，我忽然想到外面那些“小仙女”。首句已給出：“Meg,there’ssomethingoutsideIwanttoshowyou,”Iwhispered.第一句：銜接句（動作描寫）Meg趕緊用手捂住眼睛。Megquicklycoveredhereyeswithherhands.第二句：對白“我不想看,”她抽泣著說。“Idon’twanttolook,”Shesniffled.抽/吸鼻子第三句：對白“到窗口來，好嗎”你會喜歡的。我在這里。你會沒事的。”我承諾。“Cometothewindow,OKIt’ssomethingyouwilllike.I’mhere.You’llbeallright.”Ipromised.第四句：動作whisper當(dāng)我們終于走到窗前時，我悄悄地關(guān)掉了燈。Whenwehadfinallyreachedthewindow,Iquietlyswitchedoffthelamp.第五句：環(huán)境描寫涼爽潮濕的空氣從開著的窗紗里吹進來。Awhisperofcool,dampairsiftedthroughthescreenoftheopenwindow.第六句：環(huán)境描寫外面，茂密的樹木伸入烏云般的樹葉中，螢火蟲像閃爍的星星一樣在周圍盤旋。Outside,thickchunksoftreesreachedupintoblackcloudsofleavesandfireflieshoveredaroundliketwinklingstars.第七句：動作Meg用手抵住窗戶，把自己推開。Megpressedherhandsagainstthewindow,pushingherselfaway.第八句：動作（銜接下段）但后來她注意到了。她僵硬的手臂放松了。Butthenshenoticedthem.Herstiffenedarmsrelaxed.首句已給出：“Tinyfairies,Mike!”shesaid,pressingherforeheadagainstthewindow,“Everywhere!”第一句：銜接句當(dāng)然，她們不是仙女。Theyweren’tfairies,ofcourse.第二句：環(huán)境描寫但閃爍的燈光確實存在，而且在我看來，比魔法還要好。Butthewinkinglightsreallyexistedandwere,inmyopinion,betterthanmagic.

第三句：環(huán)境描寫我想告訴Meg這些不可思議的昆蟲，它們在黑暗中閃爍，相互發(fā)出信號。IwantedtotellMegabouttheseincredibleinsectsthatflashedinthedark,signalingtoeachother.第四句：動作然后我低頭看著Meg閃亮的眼睛，我決定改天再告訴她這是螢火蟲。ThenIlookeddownintoMeg’sshiningeyes,andIdecidedshecouldlearnaboutfirefliessomeothertime.

第五句：動作Meg被這令人驚嘆的景色迷住了，她完全忘記了想家，很快就靠在我的肩膀上睡著了。Megwassoabsorbedinthebreathtakingscenethatshecompletelyforgotherhomesicknessandsoonfellasleepagainstmyshoulder.第六句：回歸主題我想事實證明我可以處理一切——只要有魔法仙女的一點幫助。IguessitturnedoutthatIcouldhandleeverything—withalittlehelpfromthemagicalfairies.第一篇范文“Meg,there’ssomethingoutsideIwanttoshowyou,”Iwhispered.Megquicklycoveredhereyeswithherhands.“Idon’twanttolook,”Shesniffled.“Cometothewindow,OKIt’ssomethingyouwilllike.I’mhere.You’llbeallright.”Ipromised.Whenwewerefinallyreachedthewindow,Iquietlyswitchedoffthelamp.Awhisperofcool,dampairsiftedthroughthescreenoftheopenwindow.Outside,thickchunksoftreesreachedupintoblackcloudsofleavesandfireflieshoveredaroundliketwinklingstars.Megpressedherhandsagainstthewindow,pushingherselfaway.Butthenshenoticedthem.Herstiffenedarmsrelaxed.低聲說用手捂住眼睛抽噎走到窗前時悄悄地關(guān)掉了燈涼爽潮濕的空氣從開著的窗紗里吹進來茂密的樹木伸入烏云般的樹葉中，螢火蟲像閃爍的星星一樣在周圍盤旋用手抵住窗戶她僵硬的手臂放松了“Tinyfairies,Mike!”shesaid,pressingherforeheadagainstthewindow,“Everywhere!”Theyweren’tfairies,ofcourse.Butthewinkinglightsreallyexistedandwere,inmyopinion,betterthanmagic.IwantedtotellMegabouttheseincredibleinsectsthatflashedinthedark,signalingtoeachother.ThenIlookeddownintoMeg’sshiningeyes,andIdecidedshecouldlearnaboutfirefliessomeothertime.Megwassoabsorbedinthebreathtakingscenethatshecompletelyforgotherhomesicknessandsoonfellasleepagainstmyshoulder.IguessitturnedoutthatIcouldhandleeverything—withalittlehelpfromthemagicalfairies.額頭貼在窗戶上閃爍的燈光它們在黑暗中閃爍，相互發(fā)出信號。梅格被這令人驚嘆的景色迷住了，她完全忘記了她的鄉(xiāng)愁，我想事實證明我可以處理一切——只要有魔法精靈的一點幫助。第二篇范文②“Meg,there’ssomethingoutsideIwanttoshowyou,”Iwhispered.Withatendersmileandatouchofanxiety,Iapproachedmylittleprincess.Kneelingdown,Iwrappedmyarmaroundher.Stillfixinghereyesonthewindow,Megwhimpered,hervoicequivering,“Mike,Idon’tlikethedark.”“Iknow,Iknow,”Isoothed,gentlyrunningmyfingersthroughherhair.“Buthey,doyourememberthetinyfairieswereadaboutintheforestTheyareheretoprotectyou!”Sheturnedtomewithwateryeyes,herfaceetchedwithcuriosity.Encouragedbymyreassuranceandsteadyvoice,shefollowedmetothewindow.帶著溫柔的微笑和一絲焦慮我跪下來，用胳膊摟住她梅格仍然盯著窗戶，聲音顫抖地嗚咽著說我安慰她，輕輕地用手指撥弄她的頭發(fā)她轉(zhuǎn)向我，眼眶濕潤，臉上充滿了好奇在我的安慰和堅定的聲音的鼓舞下

“Tinyfairies,Mike!”shesaid,pressingherforeheadagainstthewindow,“Everywhere!”O(jiān)utside,atroopoffirefliestwinkledliketinyfairies,castingasoft,magicalglowinthedarkness.Meg’sexcitementbubbledoverasshewatchedthefascinatingdanceoflightoutside.Thenightenvelopeduswithitsgentleembrace,wrappingusinablanketdecoratedwithdiamondsandwarmth.Together,wemarveledatthebeautyofnature’sownminiaturespectacle,feelingasifwehadsteppedintoapageofMeg’sbelovedfairybook.Afterawhile,Meg’seyesgrewheavyandshepeacefullydriftedofftosleep.Iwasquitecertainshewouldmeetherfairiesinherdreams.

一群螢火蟲像小仙女一樣閃閃發(fā)光，在黑暗中發(fā)出柔和而神奇的光芒梅格看著外面迷人的燈光，興奮之情溢于言表。夜色溫柔地?fù)肀е覀儯盐覀児阡仢M鉆石和溫暖的毯子里。我們一起驚嘆于大自然的微縮奇觀之美，感覺自己仿佛走進了梅格心愛的童話書的一頁。梅格的眼睛變得沉重起來，她平靜地睡著了我很肯定她會在夢中見到她的仙女。第三篇范文③“Meg,there’ssomethingoutsideIwanttoshowyou,”Iwhispered.AmusementtingedmyvoiceasItriedtodrawherattentiontotheoutside.“It’stoodark!”Megshookherhead,withfearwrittenalloverherface.BeforeIcouldsayanythingelse,sheburstintotearsandcurledupinmyarms,beggingmetotakeherhome.“Doyouwanttoseethetinyfairies”Iwhisperedagain,prayingquietlythatIcouldcaptureherinterest.Muchtomyrelief,thementionof“fairies”seemedtoworkwonders.Megdriedhertears,lookingupatmewithmistyeyesfilledwithcuriosity.“Wherearethey”sheaskedeagerlyasIplacedherbythewindow,drawingbackthecurtainstorevealthegleamingfireflies.我的聲音里帶著一種樂趣。臉上滿是恐懼。蜷縮在我懷里梅格擦干眼淚，抬起頭看著我，迷糊的眼睛里充滿了好奇。當(dāng)我把她放在窗前，拉開窗簾，露出閃閃發(fā)光的螢火蟲時，她急切地問。

“Tinyfairies,Mike!”shesaid,leaningherforeheadagainstthewindow,“Everywhere!”Thereinthedarkofthenight,anenchantingsceneunfoldedasnumerousfirefliesilluminatedthesur